- I slowly walked home. Rain soaked my head, I was the only one on the street. I could see the corner up ahead that I needed to turn on to get home. I ran quickly to get out of this chilly rain but when I turned the corner I saw him. Normally this would be great. But he was with her...And worse than that, they were kissing. This wasn’t a goodbye peck on the cheek either...This was a mouth on mouth kiss... I couldn’t bear the pain of watching so i took a step forward knowing they would stop. It worked. They turned to look and she took a step back from him...He looked at me...Remorse on his face, and whispered, "I know you love me Alice, and I love you...but I love her more.." Tears were falling down my face over and over again…I ran&pushed my way between them...My heart aching once again
- by AliceCullenOmg |
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- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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- Title: Aching Heart
- Artist: AliceCullenOmg
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Description:
Another short story about a girl seeing the one she loves kissing someone else..This was kind of like the other one..But its ohkaaaay..Cmnt yes? thanks!
<33AliceCullenOmg - Date: 12/22/2008
- Tags: aching heart raining kissingsomeoneelse tears
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ShannonOhNoes - 07/23/2009
- omg... i feel so... lifeless... LIFE-LESS...
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- Emo Kuromi Nui - 05/11/2009
- awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love it
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- Stalked by Eve - 01/13/2009
- wow.. this is REALLY good.I could actutally picture myself in the situation.
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- Xx-Luna-Kitty-xX - 12/22/2008
- wow i could see something like that happening to me. i agree i wanted to cry
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- Arlikie - 12/22/2008
- It made me want to cry....this is depressingly good.
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