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Chapter 1: The Disaster
"It's an excedingly simple process! How hard is it to just put on some gloves then snap!" June 26, 2958; the day it all went wrong. "I get that much! But what I want to know is WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!" Identification: Void. Classification: Test Subject. "I DON'T KNOW! THAT'S WHY YOU HAVE TO TEST THEM!!" Identification: Ace. Classification: Experimental Weapons Test Professor.
"Please just try on the gloves & SHUT UP!!!" "Fine!!! GOD DAMN PROFESSORS!!! Constantly have to harass some one!" "Just SHUT... nevermind. Your task is to take out the dummies without setting off the alarms. You will be tested on 4 things: time, swiftness, subtlety, & usage. If you can manage 3 of these 4 tasks, you'll pass the test. If not, you'll more than likely be executed with the rest of the failures." "WHOA!!! EXECUTED!?! You can't do that... wait! Test? Pass? I thought it was a testing facility, not school." "I don't know why either, all I know is that I have to mark it as a pass or a fail."
"Okay, I'm ready." "Okay." Ace pushes a button that lowers Void into the testing arena. "There is only 1 thing I have to warn you about: you can use both gloves at the same time, but just don't cross the bolts that come out. We don't know exactly what will happen, but we do know it isn't good." "Okay, can do." Void turns around & aoutomatically shoots 1 down without setting off the alarms. "Good, just 29 more!"
Void hides in the holographic bushes & sneaks around until he gets behind a big group of the robotic dummies. "HA!!" He snaps multiple times, releasing 20 bolts, none of them touching & 12 of them missing. "DAMN! THAT ******** SUCKED LIKE HELL!!!" "It's okay. You hit most of them!" Ace marks a check for "usage". "Just keep going!" Void runs & tackles a robot headed for the alarm switch, attracting the attention of more. "s**t!!!" Ace puts an "X" for "subtlety", but a check for "time".
"Come on, you can do this!" Void turns around, accidentally snapping both fingers in the same direction. "YOU ******** DUMBASS!!!" The bolts barely miss. "Phew!" "Hey, I'm smarter than to cross the bolts after you told me not to." They ricoche off of the rocks & hit! *BOOM!!!!!!!* "WTF!?!" HOLY s**t!!!" Ace looks out of the window & sees 20 Rio Grande Hollows! "IS THIS PART OF THE TEST!?!"
"RUN!!!" Void blaintly ignores Ace & runs straight for them. "I can take 'em!" "NO!! YOU'RE NOT STRONG ENOUGH!!!" Void is taken away by the hollows & Ace starts fighting. "I TOLD YOU NOT TO FIGHT THEM!!" Suddenly, 1 of the hollows stabs ace in the heart from behind! He blacks out, his last sight being Void being pulled into the hoolow dimension. Then, unknowingly to him, a white speck comes across his face & lands on his forehead. Then, another,& another! Suddenly, he jumps up! He now has a hollow mask! He pulls out a black electricity beam & attacks the hollows with it. They all either parish or run. Then, just as quickly as it came, it left. The mask was gone. The hollows, disapeared. But the damage, still there. His tester, suspectedly dead, taken to the hollow dimension.
Chapter Two: Soul Society
"Good, good class! You're all doing great!" 10 years after the accident, Ace is teaching a class in the Soul Academy. He now teaches Bankai transformation & reversion. "Now, here's a tip: put all of your energy into your core. Here, let me show you." Ace walks over to a wall. He does a random asortment of hand motions & signals. Then, he claps his hands together, & slams them onto the wall. There is a sudden blast of high energy. The wall opens to reveal that it was, in fact a secret panel. Inside of this panel was a sword.
"Now, watch & learn, literally." He puts both hands on the sword. As he does, the spiritual pressure in the room seems to increase slightly. Then, he let go with one hand, swings it down so that it is at a diagonal angle with the ground. Suddenly, as the only warning to what is about to happen, the spiritual pressure transforms into a crushing force, feeling as though to be under thousands of pounds. Then, there is a slight glow to the sword, its black sheefe reflecting the light it gave off itself. Unexpectantly to the students, thereis an enormous explosion of energy & force.
As the dust & dirt clears, there appears to be a glow, dark & ominous, eminating from the sword. Once it was completely cleared, the students stared in awe. The sword had transformed into nothing more than a golden handle with a black beam of elecricity darting out from where the blade used to be. "Now, students, if you recall, I mentioned about how to change your sambakto into Bankai form multiple times. Hopefully this will prove to be a positive example of how to do it." Ace did a few more hand motions, slams his hans on the handle of the sambakto, & it reverts, releaving the unprepared students from the crushing spiritual pressure. He then returns the blade to the hidden panel.
"Now students, to properly, & safely, deploy your Bankai forms at your levels takes skill. You must, as previously stated, put all of your energy into your core. Yes, I do mean all of it. If you don't it will connect to the energy you have left, & extract your spiritual energy, therefor, nearly, if not completely, killing you." A few of the students gasp. Others shake their heads. "Next, you must focuss on your sambaktos. OH! Nearly forgot a critical detail. They MUST be in their SECOND forms. Where was I? Oh yeah. After you focuss on it, you then release every bit of the energy that you have stored in your core into the weapon."
"Now, if you have done all of those steps correctly, you should reach Bankai form successfully & safely. By safely, I mean for you & all AROUND you." Ace suddenly stops with the lesson, feeling an ominous presence about to enter the room. "MOVE!!" He forces the students into a training area he calls, the basement. Just as he does, a portal rips open, throwing a hollow body into the room. Within 5 seconds after, a person comes out, throwing his sword into the bottom of the hollows mask, ripping it off & adding it to an empty spot on his armor.
"Who are you?" Ace demanded an answer. The obvious bounty hunter stopped. He quickly turned around, pulling out a sambakto & transforming it into its second form, nearly hitting Ace. As he jumps back, Ace has his sambakto transport into his hand, already in its second form. "So it's a duel you want then!?! Fine! PREPARE TO DIE!!!" He leaps foreward, automatically transforming his sambakto into its Bankai form & using the energy from the transformation to blast back his opponent. As he flies backwards, the enemy shifts his sambakto into a Bankai form, too! "WHAT!?!?!" Ace was surprised & shocked by this. Then there is a familiar yet ominous & dark voice. "TOO SLOW!!" It was the bounty hunter.
He jabs his Bankai foreward, launching Ace back to hit a boulder. He gets up, attempting to balance & suddenly launching the "blade" at his enemy, creating an explosion that he didn't even expect. He looks up, astonished at the sight that he is beholding. The enemy had blocked the attack by changing his Bankai into a sheild! "But h-h-h-how!?!?!" Ace, still stunned, retrieves his blade. "As I said before, you're too slow." The stranger, as unfamiliar as he was, still set something off in Ace's head. Then it hit him. "Were you in a testing facility before you were in the hollow dimension?" This seemed to catch the enemies attention. "Y-y-yes, I was..."
Chapter 3: Actuality of the Truth
"How did you know?" At this point, the enemy's identity became clear to Ace. "You're Void!!!" Shocked, The stranger responded."Y-y-yes. How do you know about me!?!" Void, frightened by the fact that this complete stranger to him knew more about him than anyone else that he met in the hollow dimention. "I knew it! We finally found you!" Ace seemed to have a gleam in his eye as he said this."Wait! I remember now! You're that professor that kept yelling at me!! I ******** HATE YOU!!!" WHOA, WHOA!! I don't see you in 10 ******** years & this is how you greet me!?! NO!! I'm a highly respected teacher & principle! Not to mention one of the leading scientists here in the soul society!! YOU DO NOT TALK TO ME LIKE THAT!!" "I CAN TALK TO YOU HOWEVER I WANT!!! YOU HAVE NO AUTHORITY OVER ME!!" "ACTUALLY I DO!! AS LONG AS YOU'RE IN THE SOUL SOCIETY, I HAVE AS MUCH AUTHORITY OVER YOU AS A KING DOES HIS KINGDOM!!" "I can't breathe..."
One of the students that wasn't knocked out was being crushed by the enormous spiritual pressure of the two fighters Bankai. "Maybe now would be a good time to revert the Bankai..." As Ace said this, he had a little smirk on his face. "Yeah, probably." Void started to laugh. "Sad that you're such a respected member of this place, yet you can't teach the students how to withstand a little bit of spiritual pressure..." "Actually, this is the begining of the school year. These are new students. They are just starting there lessons on Bankai transformation & pressure." "Okay then. Shouldn't they do pressure resistance before transformation?" "Please don't tell me how to teach my students in MY academy. It's just not right." "Okay, Okay. Don't get mad. I was just saying." As He said this, he hada smirk on his face, signalizing that he knew he was right.
"Okay, you just need to stop acting like that!" Void's happiness quickly turned to anger. " Acting like what!?!" "Like you klnow what you're talking about, because you don't" "You wanna make a fight out of it!?!" "Sounds fine to me! But first, we need to get the students out of here. I don't think that they can withstand another fight." "Sounds good to me." They both turn around to see students struggling to stand, knocked out, & laying on the floor in pain.
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- Title: Tide: An Alteration of Bleach
- Artist: dontbeanemokid
- Description: These are part of a book that I was writing. I kinda dropped outta doing it though. This is the 1st thing that I've EVER done so please be easy on the mean comments. I do know that there's a lot of typing errors... so please don't tell me bout 'em. If I get enough positive responses I might continue typing more of it. Just a heads-up; there is foul language, though it may be filtered. I'm not quite done with the third chapter though.
- Date: 01/28/2009
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- Avenged Vampire86 - 02/03/2009
- Language, much? Maybe you should try toning it down a bit, hon. Other than that, I love the Bleach referrence ;D
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