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Ivan was a timid little man - so timid that the villagers called him "Pigeon" or mocked him with the the title, "Ivan the Terrible." Every night Ivan stopped in at the saloon which was on the edge of the village cemetery. Ivan never crossed the cemetery to get to his lonely shack on the other side. That path would save many minutes, but he had never taken it - not even in the full light of noon.
Lats one winter's night, when bitter wind and snow beat against the saloon, the customers took up the familiar mockery. "Ivan's mother was scared by a canary when she carried him." Ivan the Terrible - Ivan the Terribly Timid One."
Ivan's sickly protest only fed their taunts, and they jeered cruelly when the young Cossack lieutenant flung his horrid challenge at their quarry.
"You are a pigeon, Ivan. You'll walk all around the cemetery in this cold - but you dare not cross it."
Ivan murmured, the cemetery is nothing to cross, Lieutenant. It is nothing but earth, like all the other earth."
The lieutenant cried, "A challenge, then! Cross the cemetery tonight, Ivan, and I'll cross give you five rubles - five gold rubles!"
Perhaps it was the vodka. Perhaps it was the temptation of the five gold rubles. No one ever knew why Ivan, moistening his lips, said suddenly: "Yes, Lieutenant, I'll cross the cemetery!"
The saloon echoed with their disbelief. The lieutenant winked to the men and unbuckled his saber. "Here Ivan. When you get to the center of the cemetery, in front of the biggest tomb, stick the saber into the ground. In the morning we shall go there. And if the saber is in the ground - five gold rubles to you!"
Ivan took the the saber. The men drank a toast: "To Ivan the Terrible!" They roared with laughter.
The wind howled around Ivan as he closed the door of the saloon behind him. The cold was knife-sharp. He buttoned his long coat and crossed the dirt road. He could hear the lieutenant's voice, louder than the rest, yelling after him, "Five rubles, pigeon! If you live!"
Ivan pushed the cemetery gate open. He walked fast. "Earth, just earth... like any other earth." But the darkness was a massive dread. "five gold rubles..." The wind was cruel and the saber was like ice in his hands, Ivan shivered under the long, thick coat and broke into a limpimg run.
He recognized the large tomb. He must have sobbed- that was the sound that was drowned in the wind. And he kneeled, cold and terrified, and drove the saber through the crust into the hard ground. With all his strength he pushed it down to the hilt. It was done. The cemetery... the challenge... five gold rubles.
Ivan started to rise from his knees. But he could not move. Something held him. Something gripped him in an unyielding and implaceable hold. Ivan tugged and lurched and pulled - gasping in his panic, shaken by a monstrous fear. But something held Ivan. he cried out in terror, then made senseless gurgling noises.
They found Ivan,next morning, on the ground in front of the tomb that was in the center of the cemetery. He was frozen to death. The look on his face was not that of a frozen man, but of a man killed by some nameless horror. And the lieutenant's saber was in the ground where Ivan had pounded it - through the dragging folds of his long coat.
- by I x I - A D R I A N |
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- | Submitted on 02/11/2009 |
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- Title: The Path Through The Cemetery
- Artist: I x I - A D R I A N
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A story about a timid man that was killed by himself.
- Date: 02/11/2009
- Tags: path through cemetery
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Ninja Chaotix Dragon - 02/15/2009
- This isn't too bad, I rather enjoyed it. (4/5)
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- darkangel9194 - 02/15/2009
- Very odd but good. You're word choice is fantastic. 4/5
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- Clapper Cheeks - 02/14/2009
- I've read a different version of this story... But I like this version better. Read one about a girl who was challenged at a party to to the same thing with a knife, and ended up scaring herself to death. Nice. 4/5.
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