Kira the half blood vampire

• Artist: xx serenity ninaxx
• Description: a girl left alone for years its her time to what she is forever and she is a vampire but she does not know what she will become
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: girl

A girl name Kira was alone for all time she never loved anybody intil a man name Darthoy he is a abuse man he like to abuse his girlfriend. Kira did not like that so she hit him with a pan. She left him and went to England and lived there but he found her she had friends he got mad he killed his friends. she knows he is in town she finds him he is happy but she said I will kill you my love.

Comments

[elmomustdie38]

are you failing ela?more detail, too short,needs better bme shall i continue???

[Pepsi93]

It jumps around too much. Try putting some detail in.

[-Deathly Destruction-]

Erm....spell check and periods, please?