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*Sunset fills the sky with the night sky, and the moonlight is barley shown. it's 8: 14 pm.*
*Raphael, Reaper, Nightmare, Sugar, Ayane and Emily are walking along the dirt road.*
Ayane: I'm starting to think that this road is gonna kill us all.
Nightmare: Yeah...tell me about it.
Raphael: Ayane...come on, it exists, it's go to go somewhere.
Emily: *whispering.* Oh, Goddd.
*A pause while they're walking...*
Reaper: Look, we're all a little tired, and we're going to be home soon...k?
*Another pause.*
Sugar: I wonder if leaving Ghost there was the right thing to do...
Nightmare: Why are you worried about him??
*Nightmare teased. Sugar looked at her.*
Sugar: I'm not!
*She slapped her lightly.*
Sugar: i'm just wondering if he's okay...
Reaper: That's called, worrying about him.
Sugar: *sigh* Whatever...
*They walk more, and they suddenly see an abandoned town. There are five houses far spread out from each other, and sidewalks all in the middle. There are some cactus' standing out, and in the middle.*
*Dust glides right above the sand, and there's an abandoned car on the far right corner of the town.*
Raphael: What...the hell?
Sugar: What the hell is this??
*Raphael and Reaper take a step closer.*
Reaper: Does anybody live here anymore?
Raphael: I don't know...it looks abandoned.
*They take a minute and look at the place.*
Sugar: So...this is where the man told us to go...
Raphael: Damn...
Ayane: I knew that crazy man was full of s**t.
*Nightmare walks to Raphael.*
Nightmare: So...what now?
*Raphael thinks for a minute.*
Raphael: let's see if anyone lives there...maybe they can help us.
Emily: Are you kidding? there's no way I'm walking there! It looks creepy as all hell!
Ayane: If we need help, we don't have another choice.
*Emily stares at the town. She got a funny feeling about it.*
Raphael: Let's go...it'll be alright.
*They all take a minute, and walk toward the town. Emily watches for a second then she follows them.*
*They all enter the town. It was extremely quiet. it looked like no one has lived there in a long time.*
Ayane: I seriously...don't think that anyone lives here.
Sugar: Really...look at this place.
*Raphael takes a few steps foward.*
Raphael: There's gotta be SOEMONE here.
*Ayane walks beside him.*
Ayane: How about we split up?
Raphael: Alright. You and me, Sugar, Nightmare and Rex, Reaper and Emily?
Sugar: Alright...Come on...
*Nightmare and Sugar walk off. Emiy looks at Raphael.*
Emily: I'm just real scared...
Ayane: Listen...you have NOTHING to be worried about. We'll find help, and we can go straight home...okay?
*Emily nods.*
*Raphael and Ayane walk off.*
*Reaper walks up to Emily.*
Reaper: Let's go.
*Reaper walks off, and Emily follows, looking all around her.*
*Sugar and Nightmare are walking along the sidewalk.*
Sugar: What's in that house?
*The walk in front of a house and they stare at it. it's old and the windows and walls are cracked up good. The roof is halfway off the house. there were two floors. From putside, they could see that the inside was very dirty.*
Nightmare: Are you kidding me?
Sugar: Come on...there might be someone living there.
*Nightmare nods and they walk in the house.*
*It goes to Emily and Reaper, in a house. Emily is upstairs, in the hallway, and Reaper is downstairs, looking at the old fireplace.*
*It was nine out already. The full moon shinned brightly upon the town. Ayane and Raphael are walking along the sidewalk.*
Raphael: Listen...I'm sorry if I put us in this mess...
*Ayane sighed and smiled a tiny bit.*
Ayane: Its fine, Raphael. I mean, I know you didn't mean to get us into trouble...we all just want to go home.
*Raphael nods. he finds a small shack.*
Raphael: I'll go check this place out, okay? Stay out here?
Ayane: Yeah, sure.
*Raphael walks inside, and Ayane stays behind and looks around, rubbing her arms because it was chili outside.*
*Emily enters a bedroom. Inside, there's just an old dresser with two heavy vases on top of it. She walks in closer, and suddenly, a deformed man comes out of the closet. Emily is staring at the vases, not knowing he was behind her. Reaper left the house to find Raphael and the others.*
*The deformed man suddenly runs, and grabs Emily, grabbing her tight. Emily starts to scream, but the deformed man, covers her mouth, with his fingers stuck together. He forces her to the ground, and he pins her down. His other hand is normal. Emily's scream is muffled.*
*Ayane is still waiting for Raphael, when she suddenly she hears a growl in the bushes. She looks at the bushes with a confused look on her face. The growling grows louder. Ayane jumps and the growling suddenly turns into a laughter. Ayane's eyes widen and she runs inside the shack to get Raphael.*
Ayane: Raphael! Raphael?
*She finds him walking toward her.*
Ayane: oh, my God, Raphael!
Raphael: What? What is it?
Ayane: I--I heard something!
Raphael: What? What'd you hear?
Ayane: I..I don't know...like a laughing noise.
Raphael: A l-laughing noise?
Ayane: S-somethings going on! Please, let's just get back to the trailer!
Raphael: Alright, j-just calm down. We'll leave right now.
*They both leave the shack and walk outside.*
Ayane: Sugar! Emily!
Raphael: Nightmare! Reaper!
*Ayane and Raphael see Nightmare and Sugar and they run to them.*
Nightmare: What is it??
Ayane: We're leaving!
Sugar: Why, what's wrong??
*Reaper walks toward them.*
Reaper: Hey.
Ayane: Where's Emily?
Reaper: In the house.
Ayane: Go and get her! !
Reaper: Why?
Ayane: Just go get her!! DX
*Reaper does so, and the rest try and find Rex.*
*Inside the house, the deformed man forces Emily downstairs, and pins her down. She's still screaming, but it's muffled. Once he sees Reaper walking toward the house, he suddenly presses a button.*
*Suddenly, a huge bang is heard, and someone on a wooden wall of a house, with the fire around it. Ghost was pierced with spikes, to the wall, and fire was surrounding him.*
*Raphael, Sugar, Nightmare and Ayane look at the fire.*
Sugar: Ghost...that's Ghost!
*She starts running toward the fire, but Raphael pulls her back.*
Raphael: Sugar, we don't know what that is!
Sugar: That's Ghost! Let me go!!
*She breaks free and runs toward the fire. Reaper and Nightmare follow.*
Ayane: Ghost!!
*Her and and Raphael run toward the fire. Suddenly, another deformed man jumps off from the roof of a house, with a sharp large kitchen knife, and a rare golden gun.*
*He then laughs and enters the house Emily is in.*
*Inside the house, Emily is being raped by the deformed man. She's screaming for help, but the deformed man is covering her mouth.*
*The other deformed man grabs the one raping Emily, and pulls him off of her.*
Deformed Man 2: MOVE!! YOU'RE NOT GONNA BE THE ONE DOING THAT!
*He pushes him, and Emily starts crawling away, screaming. The deformed man grabs Emily by her shirt, and throws her to a wall, nearby.*
*She lands, on her back, as the deformed man 2 unzips his pants and her takes off hers. She starts hitting him in the face, screaming.*
Emily: GET OFF!!!
*The deformed man 2 punches her, and she's knocked out.*
*Raphael, Nightmare, Reaper, Sugar and Ayane are trying to set the fire off, by putting it out with water, by a well they found near by.*
*Ghost is in a firepit, with a LARGE hooks pierced in his stomach. He's already dead.*
*Raphael is trying his best to take the fire out.*
Delilah: Raphael, do something!
*Nightmare is trying to calm Sugar down, because she's breaking down, crying.*
Reaper: Nightmare, find Emily!
*Nightmare grabs Sugar.*
Nightmare: Come in, it'll be okay!
*They run to find Emily, when they hear her screaming in a house.*
Nightmare: Oh my God...Sugar, just stay here, okay??
*Nightmare runs for the house, and Sugar stays behind, crying.*
*Nightmare enters the house and gasps. She sees the deformed man 1 licking Emily, and deformed man 2, staring at her.*
Emily: H-H-help, Help!
*Nightmare looks at deformed man 2.*
Deformed Man 2: You're...gonna...die..
*Nightmare grabs a large vase and smashes it against his head. The deformed man falls on the ground. Nightmare goes for Emily, but the deformed man 2 grabs Nightmare's arm and starts squeezing it. Nightmare screams in pain. The deformed man 2, suddenly points the gun at Emily and loads it. Nightmare gaps.*
Nightmare: No, please!
*The deformed man 2, looks at Nightmare. One false move, and Emily would die. He starts licking Nightmare across the face, and on her lips.*
*Outside, Sugar then starts to walk toward the house.*
*Inside, the deformed man 2 is giving Nightmare a hickey. She's crying, and Emily is crying as well.*
*Sugar enters the house. She sees what's happening and covers her mouth. She goes for a vase, but the deformed man 1 yells out, and the deformed man 2 pushes Nightmare out of his way, and he throws his kitchen knife, and it pierces in Sugar's throat.*
*Sugar falls on the ground, gagging. Blood is pouring out of her neck. She tries gasping for breath. She's garggling, as blopod come sout her mouth.*
*Emily screams.*
Emily: SUGAR!!
*The deformed man two takes the knife out of her neck and drops it purposley. Sugar dies.*
*Nightmare slowly reaches for the knife, with the deformed man 2 not seeing.*
*The deformed man 2 aims the gun at Emily.*
*Emily screams, but Nightmare pierces the knife in the deformed man 2's stomach. He yells in pain, as Nightmare starts twisting it. He then, slowly starts to aim the gun toward Nightmare.*
*Getting closer and closer.*
Emily: NIGHTMARE!!!
*Nightmare looks at the deformed man 2, and he suddenly pulls the trigger, shooting Nightmare's eye, killing her. She falls back, dead, as Emily screams in horror.*
*The Raphael, Reaper and Ayane hear where the shot came from.*
Reaper: Get to the house!!
*Reaper and Ayane start running toward the house, as Raphael leaves the fire, and follows them.*
*The deformed man 1, runs out, and the deformed man 2, has Emily by the hair and he forces out of the house.*
Reaper: Emily!!!
Emily: Reaper!!
*The deformed man 2 suddenly aims the gun at Emily's head. Emily starts gasping and whimpers.*
Deformed Man 2: Looook attttt meeeee...
*He pulls the trigger, but the bullets have ran out.*
Man: Damn....
*He goes to Emily's ear.*
Man: I'll come back for you...
*He runs off. Reaper, Raphael and Ayane run back about a few mometns later, and they see Emily lying on the floor crying.*
Reaper: Are you okay??
*Emily just crys, kneeling down.*
*The deformed men disappear. Raphael enters the house.*
Raphael: Oh...noo...
*He kneels down to Nightmare. A tear rolls down his eye.*
Raphael: Come on...don't die...
*Ayane and Reaper run in, as they see what has happened to Sugar and Nightmare. They cover thier mouths and eyes.*
Reaper: This...didn't happen...please..
*Ayane just stares in horror, as they don't know what to do.*
- by XCherrehCokeX3 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: Bloody Doom! (Act 3)
- Artist: XCherrehCokeX3
- Description: EVERYONE! This is by far the most intense act you'll read!!! FIND OUT WHAT THEY DO AFTER THEY WALKED A LONG WAY! =]
- Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: bloody doom
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- Playfully Crazy - 02/25/2009
- *twitches eye* you made me freaking useless... >.> *puts hands to her sides and makes then into fists as she looks away* can i pleeeeaaaasssee kill or help someone?! please? ;.;
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