- Okay class mrs willson said time to go out side the kindergardeners ran to the door.Jordan ran to the marry go round and tied is jacket to the marry go round and around he went. Okay class mrs willson said time to go in Jordan ran in. Oh no i forgot my jacket he said he ran out to get it he could not get the jacket off he ran to the door it was locked and so was the gate he sat there on the marry go round he heard a boom. Jordan fell over his teacher ran to the door jordan sat there under the big dark oak trees. Blood went across the mary go round.
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- Title: Murder on the marry go round
- Artist: caitlin5972
- Description: if you want to hear the rest of the story pm me ill write another
- Date: 03/04/2009
- Tags: murder marry round
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- SgtSexyPants - 07/09/2009
- sick, sick child!
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- ClownGirl Jester - 03/07/2009
- i dont really get it but still. COOL!
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- warriorprincesdanine - 03/05/2009
- you should work on the puntuation but be sides that its great smile
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