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Chapter four
I got there and was surprised to see that everyone was still there and still happy. Now that I was about to leave I saw I should have spent more time with them . I walked up to Melly." Can I talk to you privately?" I asked." Sure," she replied. We walked into the kitchen and were greeted by the cooks. Then we entered the sound proof room used by the boss to fire people privately. I closed the door, "Melly I may be gone for a while," was all I said I waited for her response. "Are you going to go on a vacation ?"she asked. She looked confused. "No," I said," I’m going to go with out my parents to a umm place..." I told her.
She looked like she was about to faint and the bad part was that I didn’t know why . "Are you ok ?"I asked as I sat her down on a chair she didn’t even look capable of standing." Yes, where are you going, with who are you going, "she started shooting out questions with no time in between to answer. Her questions stopped abruptly ."Your going with that boy aren’t you?"she asked. I nodded. "Why ?"she asked weakly. "He’s helping me find Angel,"I said.She shook her head."He's been dead for three years,Gabby." she shook her head looking at me as if I had gone insane."He’s not dead Melly!"I yelled at her.
" How do you know this isn’t a trick ?"she asked . "I know because of this I pulled out the letter. "It’s in Angels handwriting."
"Fine "she said the look onb her face told me she didn't believe me."I want to go with you," she said getting up. "No, it might become dangerous ,"I stopping her and suttubg her back down. "More of a reason for me to go with you ,"she told me trying to get back up. "No I will nbot alow you to be in danger because of me."I told her then walked out I was about to leave but I noticed the paper with the steps. She turned around and saw that Melly was holding the paper. "You dropped this ,"she told me. I grabbed it. "Thank you."
- by Adriana Pineda |
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- | Submitted on 03/16/2009 |
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- Date: 03/16/2009
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- Not_Goth_Just_Me - 04/02/2009
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very interesting
i'll be nice
but my critism is never down grading
i want to read more
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