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One summers day, three school friends had been sent letters about a school trip. It was a free school trip so they thought they would go. So on the 2nd of august they set off on this wonderful school trip, but was it so wonderful ? . these three friends were called Tia, dannielle and tom. That day they went to school and waited outside for their transportation to where they were actually going.
Letter to Tia , Danielle and tom :
Dear sir/madam,
we would like to invite you to the best school trip of the year. this trip is free and you even get transportation. This trip will be set on the 2nd of August 2008. You will be expected to bring clean clothes and any other appliances eg. toothbrush , toothpaste as you will be staying for 1 whole week. I advise you not to miss this trip because only a few students get to come.
If you are coming please wait outside the school at 8:30am for your transmortation.
yours
sincerely
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The children didnt even think about the blank spot for the signature, they didnt even care that they didnt know who it was from. At 8:30 exactly, a limo turned up outside the school and asked for Tia, Danielle and Tom, and they got in and left the school ... for ever.
...to be continued next week...
please check in for next weeks haunted house (chapter 2) and find out what happens at the wonderful school trip .. ninja
- Title: haunted house (chapter 1)
- Artist: x_tinks_x
- Description: haunted house ... something ii thought of while ii was trying to get to sleep ... cant write it all in one block so ii am putting it into chapters. ii give it a rating of 2/5 ... ii just wana no what everyone else thinks of it. please do keep reading my haunted house fiction. uu no uu want to O.O . dun dun dun
- Date: 03/18/2009
- Tags: haunted house
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Takahiren - 09/06/2010
- Unless she dies.... Tia is the worst name you coulda given her... ((its my ex-girlfriends name and i hate it)) but im not gonna rate the story bad based on that.... shoulda put more up than that... you could have at least combined one and 2 to make it interesting... im not curious as to what happens next anymore... 2/5 ..... search for my book and rate me please??
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- RockOnGirl12 - 07/02/2009
- Want to know what happenes next week
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- iEatYourCat - 03/18/2009
- <.< >.> hmmm~ interesting. X3
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- funny_but_evil - 03/18/2009
- oo yeah 5/5 lol razz
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- funny_but_evil - 03/18/2009
- i luv it i cant wait for next weeks haunted house woooo scary razz
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