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It was a sunny afternoon. Four friends laugh and chat as the sun's radiation shines on them.
Brenda has black, thick hair that reached to her shoulders. She has black eyes and tan skin. She lives on Murder Hill, the most rumored neighborhood in the world. She was wearing a blue shirt saying: HOLD ON, I'M ON MY HAMBURGER PHONE... and, blue, faded capris with red sandals.
Greg Hamstrung, Kelly Emmas, and Steven Gray was with her.
Greg and Steven always seem to fight with each other, but usually, they are messing around and make up.
Kelly was a shy girl with blonde, healthy hair. She never seemed to care what anyone thinks about her, but she's shy still.
Then, they were across the street to the 'House of Horrors'. The house was the reddest house Brenda ever saw. Besides the door, everything was red.
I heard of that house.., Brenda thought, but I never knew what was in there.
"Did you hear the rumor?" Kelly said shyly. "Two guys came in there for a girl."
"Boys are so stupid," Greg said," They'll do anything for a girl."
"You idiot, you're a guy yourself." Steven said.
Somehow, those fights seem to make their friendship stronger.
"Oh yeah? I'll bet you ten dollars to go in there." Greg said.
"In there!?" Brenda said. "You've gotta be mentally challanged to go in there!"
"Oh yeah? wanna bet on it?'"Greg said to her.
"I can't. I have to babysit." Kelly said.
"Are you chicken?" Greg said. Then, he bended towards the ground and started to peck like a chicken. Then, Steven kicked him in the butt.
"Quit making fun of her!" Steven said.
"I'll bring my four friends over." Kelly said.
Then, a girl with black hair with blue highlights, pale skin, and grey eyes walked in. She was wearing a black tank top, black jean capris, and goth boots.
"Hey, Samantha." Greg said. Then, Steven pushed him to the ground and said Hi himself.
"Hey, Samantha, are your parents back yet?" Brenda said
"Who?" Samantha said.
"Your parents. Are they back from their business trip?" Kelly said.
"No."
"But it's been nine weeks! Business trips don't last that long!!!" Steven said.
"It's a very long business trip." She responded.
Then, she turned the opposie way to the house and walked away.
"What a goth." Greg said. Then, Steven pushed him again.
Business trips don't last for nine weeks, Brenda thought, Something is wrong...very wrong.
"So, are you still in?" Steven said, interuping her thoughts.
"Oh, yeah." She said.
Then, they all extended their arms together and threw them into the blue, cloudless sky.
Then, she felt a bad feeing. Has she made a featally bad mistake?
One that can kill her?
- by inuyasha3325 |
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- | Submitted on 03/21/2009 |
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- Title: House of Horror-ch.1
- Artist: inuyasha3325
- Description: In this chapter, Brenda and her friends make the bet, but was it a mistake, a very bad one?
- Date: 03/21/2009
- Tags: house horrorch1
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Becca_dactyl - 08/30/2009
- Needs work. Grammar and just the overall thing itself needs improvement. But the actual story is good. I like it.
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- The Angelic Oreo - 07/17/2009
- the beginning was......well....urrf......but the ending was good.
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- RockOnGirl12 - 07/01/2009
- Hmm as a fan it is awesome as a writer I would say that it needs a little work but is awesome
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- Mine Compos Mentis - 03/25/2009
- the preface was good, but this gets a little... I dunno I just wouldn't read on if it started like this..
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