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It was my turn to pick. I closed my eyes, took a breath, and put my hand into the hat. It felt around for awhile. I was searching for the right card. I was scared. I didnt want to be a laughing stock for the rest of Middle School!
It was your average day of Tubman Middle School. Except for one thing. It was the first day of "Middle Ages Week". Our school has this crazy idea that we could express ourselves by going back in time. It is scary.
I felt around a little more. I grabbed one card and pulled it out. "Not a princess or a queen." I mumbled under my breath. "Just a stupid, servant girl." On Middle Ages week, everyone gets to be a character from the time. Once we get to know how the Middle Ages Work, we get to put on a show...for the High Schoolers. Joy. We get to have wierd costumes, and LOADS of High Schoolers laughing at us. I know for sure that I am going to mess this up for all. I cant be perfect as Michelle Swan. Her perfect hair, skin, clothes, (and she just happends to be an awesome actress) always out-do me. Oh, and just to be on topic about Middle Ages week...She got to be the princess! No, shes QUEEN! I have to work for her!
NO!
By the way, Im Nicole Frenzy. Im in the 6th grade, and Im no where near being popular. I have two evil step-sisters (Melia and Mikel), one step-dad (Frank), and one awesome mom, who isnt being treated well by Frank, Melia, and Mikel. And just to let you know, Mom has CANCER! She has a really good chance of dying. And if she does die im going to be Ms. Cinderella. But, one day I will have that throne and a handsome prince. But, by the way it looks now...that option is between slim and nothing. And slim has left the building. Lets just see how the play goes...Oh, gosh.
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- | Submitted on 03/21/2009 |
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- Title: Middle Ages Week
- Artist: Zella42398
- Description: Nicole Frenzy tries her best to make it through Middle School...Can she do it?
- Date: 03/21/2009
- Tags: nicolesmessups
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Comments (3 Comments)
- JHaley - 04/02/2009
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I noticed that several times, you've forgotten to add the apostrophe between the I and M in I'm. Also, in the sentence, "I can't be perfect as Michelle Swan", an added suggestion to make the sentence sound a bit more correct(to me, anyways)would be to add another "as" between "be" and "perfect. You also have accidentally spelled "happens".
But, other than that, you did a really good job.
(Note: Pardon my critique. It's just that I have a job in the editing business) - Report As Spam
- gunyelf - 03/22/2009
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This is pretty nice I love it ^^
is there a sequel? - Report As Spam
- Zella42398 - 03/21/2009
- I worked really hard...so im hopeing for really awesome comments. But, give me your honest opinion.
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