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It was misty, the gates where dark and trying. Vine wound up the bars like darkened snakeswaiting to attack.Birds flew over head not daring to utter a sound. A bone chilling breeze blew making the trees appear to shutter as they reached towards the heavens. The gates moaned and squeaked almost singing a song of warning. I began to walk, i shuttered as i approached the vines. I looked back to see nothing but fallen leaves,weeds and trees staring straight back at me. drawing in a nervous breath,i proceeded to move forward. Looking down i walked through the gates not daring to look up. But somehow i had the urge, a strange demanding feeling making me look onward. The smashing of metal behind me forced me to look forward. I gasped. Before me was a mansion guarded by shadows. I stared at it as it silently stared back at me, waiting for something to happen. The anticipation was nerve wrecking. The wind began to pick up screaming "go back, go back" My mind spun.Taking me out of reality for only a brief moment. The mansion continued to stare. An eerie feeling ran over me, Terrified I walked on the wind began to blow again once more screaming "go back" i began to walk whispering back............... no
- by emerald core |
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- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: The Gate
- Artist: emerald core
- Description: eerie almost bone chilling (^_^)
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: gate whisper shutter moment
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Comments (2 Comments)
- SSA THE RECLUSE - 08/20/2009
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u missed a comma at the last sentance
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- Hanamura Kana - 04/03/2009
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OHHH!!!! eek eek
Scary!!
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