- There she sat, staring at the wall. Looking with a dazed look, memorizing flashbacks. She sat with her favorite doll, Milky the cow, in her lap. The TV was off. The phone never rang. She had no name. That was what bugged her the most. Eventually she fell into a light sleep/trans. The phone rang and she woke up, hoping it was that one phone call she had waited most of her life for. The call from her "Crush". The call turned out to be from her Best Friend, Lily. She didn't bother to pick up. She lived in a small box. With a power cord going to the nearest plug jack. She felt sleepy again. This time she fell into a deep sleep, dreaming about the one she loved. She dreamed of being pushed off a cliff. She couldn't get up. No matter how much she tried, she couldn't get up! Eventually she continued with a dream, She happened to have fallen into someone's arms, Her Crush's arms. Then all of a sudden, she woke up and became sad. She knew he would never love her. Then the phone rang, it was her best friend again. She didn't pick up. She then went on a walk in the soaking rain.She tried to get food but she had no money. She then bumped int her crush. She had been wearing a linen dress underneath a long coat with a hood. The hood and coat fell off revealing her gorgeous face, hair and dress. He looked at her as if she was a single red rose from a bouquet of pink flowers. He knew she was the one star that twinkled in his mind. But then a big gust of wind came before he could help her off the ground and lifted her up to the heavens. But she escaped the wind, came down, hugged her crush, and whispered in his ear saying, "i love you and will always wait for you, but you must live your life and wait till the day we meet and join as one in heaven. I will always wait for you in heaven, my love." She then drifted of as white as a phantom like herself to her house, picked up Milky, made a ghost version of Milky, and gave the real one to her crush. She then drifted off to the heavens, thinking about her soulmate and the day they would meet and combine as one.
- by MehPuppyclimbzurBamboo16 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/24/2009 |
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- Title: Last Grip of Life, and Love
- Artist: MehPuppyclimbzurBamboo16
- Description: A distressed girl waiting forever on a phone call that never came. Then she bumps into her love, but a wrong twist happens.
- Date: 04/24/2009
- Tags: last grip
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Comments (5 Comments)
- MehPuppyclimbzurBamboo16 - 06/21/2009
- um.. i wuz kinda depressed/ sad! i wuz kinda mad at a friend on gaia so i tried to express my feelings!
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- MagpiesGambit - 05/10/2009
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so she meets this guy once and then blows away and expects him to love her because she's pretty?
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And she lives in a box?
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- MehPuppyclimbzurBamboo16 - 04/25/2009
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thanks
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- Spam Sammich - 04/25/2009
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Oh my god, this is amazing.
I don't quite understand the main line, but it was fairly detailed, and I could feel her emotion.
Wonderful job, 5/5 - Report As Spam
- MehPuppyclimbzurBamboo16 - 04/24/2009
- Good story, real special!
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