- if u have ever been 2 camp gap then u no about the goat man and can skip this story if u haven't then listen closly one long trip down the zip tower but zack wasent scared he had been down a million times before he thought the harnesser was ready and jumped of then found himself dead on the ground did i mention his pet goat well that same day his goat was shot now he romes camp gap and wen ur there and ur flashlight goes missing remember who took it
- by 123pinktinisshoes321 |
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- | Submitted on 06/20/2009 |
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- Title: the goat man
- Artist: 123pinktinisshoes321
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- Date: 06/20/2009
- Tags: goatman
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- Khanja-Khanja - 07/07/2009
- Well, it's unpolished, but it had the makings of a pretty good story. People won't take you seriously if you don't use proper grammar and punctuation, so look out for that. Get your thoughts organized as well, it's hard to understand what's going on, and give more details, maybe adding some of your own ideas along with it. It could make a great short story!
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- 123pinktinisshoes321 - 06/24/2009
- srry it was my first piece of writeing and my first avi srry again i realy am
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- DobDaGawd - 06/24/2009
- f u c k you because you avi was wack so 1/5 i didnt even read it so dont even try
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- x Spaghetti Cat - 06/22/2009
- god this thing is a mess. it's one gigantic run-on sentence. I CAN'T UNDERSTAND IT!!!
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