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“Fine! I washed my hair a couple times, I admit it! Happy now? You guys ready to go to Vegas!?”
We both looked at her like she had a third head.
“Um…” Logan said.
He was a tall guy. Blond hair always in his eyes, green eyes, not to mention a fast son of a gun. He always whore some trucker’s hat or another. “Sandy…you were supposed to drive us…and your car being broken down, that’s looks like it’s not going happen.”
Wait, I got idea.
“Yeah, I’m sorry!” Sandy said.
“Um…guys” I said.
I should say try saying.
“We had this planned out for like, a month! And then you let your car go to crap! Did you check everything before we were going to make this cross country road trip anyway!??!”
“Um…guys!” I said again.
“Yeah, everything was fine, but I hit a nail, not my fault!”
“Oh, now it’s a flat tire!? I thought you said your car broke down!”
“It did!”
“GUYS!!!!” I shouted at the top of my lungs.
That stopped them.
“What!?” they both said.
“I can drive.” I offered.
Awkward silence…now.
“Um…Jackal…do you remember the last time you tried to drive? You still don’t know where the car is…and you were in it when you were driving it.”
True point.
“Yeah, but the cops don’t know about that, so it doesn’t count.” I said in my deffence
Sandy had to say something here too. Hers kinda hurts.
“Jackal! Know one knows where the car is! It’s been missing for a year and you were in it almost the entire time you were driving it! How does that even happen!?”
I kicked the grass at my feet.
“Yeah, I know! That’s how good of a driver I am! I’m still here right? Look, I’m a good driver, you both know that.”
Logan shrugged.
“I’ll give him that. Some how he can pull an e-brake turn so well he can kick cans into people’s hands.”
“Yeah, I still don’t know how you can show up at my house from yours in ten minutes when by a N.Y. cabby it take at least twenty feet.” Sandy admitted.
“Ok, ok fine…I’ll drive Logan’s car and we’ll get to Vegas in no time, is it settle?”
- Title: What the...
- Artist: bob199424
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this is a bit from one of my story ideas. i though it was funny and i wanted an second opinon.
i'm trying to go to a witty writing style and i think i'm over...witting it or something. - Date: 06/21/2009
- Tags: funny short cars drivers
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- ZainieRainyday - 06/23/2009
- There where a couple mistakes, but who doesn't make mistakes every once in a while. However the overall outcome was good. smile
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- ii_Brooke - 06/23/2009
- niice read my story Blood roses xD
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