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The darkness covered the place, but i can see a girl sitting in the sand and i can tell that she was sad and crying. I stretched my arms trying to reach her but i can't a some kind of invisible barrier was in front of me. I really want to sit next to her and comfort her, but I can't, I tried to punch the barrier but it won't break. There's nothing I could do, but stand there and stare at her while she suffers. I felt useless while I stare at that beautiful and yet sad girl. Then suddenly I felt like i was falling from where I stand. I was really falling into an endless darkness my eyes widen, trying to look for something to hold onto. But i found nothing, nothing but that endless darkness. I was falling softly but still I'm scared and I'm worried about the girl, wondering if she stopped crying. Then I felt a soft impact, my eyes opened, and I'm blinded by the light. It was a dream only a dream I told myself. I rubbed my eyes and sit on the edge of the bed. I was thinking about my dream wondering what is it about. Unable to comprehend what is it about I got up and walk out the door
~to be continued ...
- by RockPunkPrince |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/24/2009 |
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- Title: Trapped (part 1)
- Artist: RockPunkPrince
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Description:
have you ever been trapped in you own dream? your own world? somewhere anything can happen ...
hope you like my story i have some parts finished already ...
please leave any comments and suggestions you like i would gladly accept them :)
P.S.
the character is unnamed it's not because I'm lazy XP but i want the readers to relate themselves with this story as if you are the one who wrote it :) as if you are the character of my story :D - Date: 06/24/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Pugnacious Banana - 05/05/2010
- This bad grammar was kind of difficult to read.
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- blackman556 - 06/28/2009
- please write a book about this
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- lucky marianna - 06/28/2009
- that 'it was all a dream' I almost always use it to and my stories and kind of reminds me an end so I came up with a tittle 'The end or just the beginĪ½ing???'*laught evil*lol...It makes me think...and kind of mysterious!I like it!
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- uzamakinarutorocks1 - 06/27/2009
- i agree with Daft Moron i want to know how it ends... tell me when you post more up too!!
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- Daft Moron - 06/24/2009
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kewl smile
i would like to see how the rest is...tell me when you post more up smile - Report As Spam