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[Scene: A Park Near A River In Antigo Wisconsin]
Toitle looked at the two human hatchlets. He thought of eating them, but then remembered how amazed they had looked, how they had thought he was the greatest thing in the universe. A woman screamed.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Toitle snapped around and ate her head. People were running around screaming. The local police pulled up, sirenes flaring, and started shooting at Toitle, who smashed the cars with his tail and ate the police men. After this went on for 10 minutes, the local National Gaurd Platoon came in with a convoy of 1 tank and 4 jeeps. They began firing at Toitle, who ate the tanks main cannon, and sent the remaining part flying onto the humvees with his tail. He swallowed the cannon, and a tank cannon grew from his shell. He shot it at the remaining soldiers. Mikmo and Koda ran under Toitle.
"Shrink Toitle!!!" Koda yelled. Toitle shrank back to normal size, no spikes, no cannon. They ran off with him to Mikmo's house.
[Scene: A Messy Room, A Parakeet Is Chirping In A Large Cage,]
Mikmo and Koda ran into the house and into Mikmo's extreamly messy room.
His parakeet, Maxis was screeching loudly, obviously not liking the turtle they had brought in. Toitle hissed at Maxis, and he shut up, huddling inside his nest. Mikmo walked in with a large aquarium.
"This is my bros old fish tank. I filled it up with creek water yesterday 'cause you said we were gonna go Toitle Hunting. I mean Turtle Hunting." he said.
Koda dropped Toitle into the tank, and he loved it. Koda dumped some tad poles he found ate the lake in the tank. They moved the tank into the basement. By that time, the tadpoles had all been eaten, and blood filled the tank.
- by Modern Lucario |
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- | Submitted on 07/01/2009 |
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- Title: Toitle: Retaliation
- Artist: Modern Lucario
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Description:
The Toitle Saga continues. Mikmo and Koda have encountered the killer turtle, which they named Toitle What-Shall-Happen-Next?
If you havn't read Part One, go here....
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101505433
And part 3 is here....
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101524559#title - Date: 07/01/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ForeverNerdyy - 07/16/2009
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Tehe 4laugh
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- fantasygirl999 - 07/03/2009
- very action packed- might need to put in some pauses in the action so the reader doesnt get to bored of always being adrenaline rushed. other wise really good-lots of details
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