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• Artist: sweet_vamp_writer
• Description: I may have spelling mistakes but it make a person a person. So let thier be mistakes.
  I am thinking about turning this into book, so comments are allways great!
  Don't know what this to-be book is about yet.
• Date: 07/16/2009
• Tags: unknow

There was a girl who everyone loves to be around her. But they don' know her darkest secret. She probably thinks that no one will find out bout it. If they do then they must hid it form her very well. For Anastasia could tell if someone was lying and also she could do other hidden things that would make her friends envy her. Or will will envy her even more once they find out what she is or just call the national security so that the scientist could do wired experiments on her to see why she can't age. Anastasia's friends could ask her if she could change them into what she is so that they will be around each other for all eternity

Comments

[Purple-shoes616]

It needs to be a little more original but the main things are the length and the errors
have it edited if you want people to appreciate your work
also you need to give readers more than just a little taste. we want something we can sink our teeth into

[Just_another_Ojama]

meh it sounds interesting but dies out

[Wind-Blown Dandilion]

If You Don't Mind Me Commenting, Make It More Original.

[Sugar Quill Drops]

This needs to be edited. You make mistakes the first time, then you go back and fix them.

[Rachael Ramen]

I agree that mistakes make a person,
human, but still.
There's such thing as rereading and
fixing. It's what you do in a writing
test at school.