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I walked with a slow motion in my feet. Rain was pelting me. Brian walked behind me. "Ashley!" He called. I turned my head to him. "Yes?" I asked. "I thought I heard thunder." Brian said. "Nothing will ruin our walk, just keep moving." I mumbled.
The sky was black before I knew it. BOOM! A huge clap of thunder echoed across the nation. "AHHHHHH!" I sceamed. "Run!" Brian shouted. Lightening flashed before my eyes. "To the house!" I cried nervously. Then a flash of lightening streaked in the sky then it was all over.
I hit the ground hard. I could hear brian scream Ashley. Swirling colors twisted before my eyes. A bright light flashed. Is this heaven? I wondered. No it couldn't be. If it was heaven hurt too much.
I opened my eyes slowly. Brian lifted his head from my mouth. "Ashley are you alive?" Brian asked. "Yup." Was all that I could peep. Brian lifted me up. I shut my eyes as he carried me in his arms.
"She's okay." I heard a rough voice say. I opened my eyes. Doctors sourrounded me. I could see Brian looking nervously over doctors sholders. "Take me home!" I cried. "Let me do the honors." Brian said lifting me and taking me home.
- by AshleyAKAsongwriter |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/27/2009 |
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- Title: Love at the thunderstorm
- Artist: AshleyAKAsongwriter
- Description: This is sort of based on a true story except I didn't get struck by lightening and I don't think Brian would do CPR on me lol. But I was in a thunderstorm one with him yesterday to be exact so I'm gonna say this is fiction though so enjoy the story!! leave a comment!
- Date: 07/27/2009
- Tags: love thunderstorm
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- Just_another_Ojama - 07/27/2009
- this was great.i find it flawless.if u want to write for gold pm me
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