- Her skin was flawless and a light honey like color. Her hair was long, dark, and thick. Her eyes were dark and deep, with wisdom written in them. Her lips were thin and her cheekbones high. She had a pixie face and she was petite. She was very curvy and dressed to emphasize her curves. She wore a short strapless red dress. Her shoes were short boots. She has a slightly sarcastic smile on her face and her overall expression says bad girl.
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- | Submitted on 08/26/2009 |
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- Title: Untitled(DESCRIPTION ONLY)
- Artist: vampireprincessjj
- Description: THis is a description of a character I may use in a story... please critique.
- Date: 08/26/2009
- Tags: characters vampires
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Comments (2 Comments)
- csifool - 09/05/2009
- i like it,but you should give more description to her overall expretion.wat she comes off as.But thats my opion,i like it nontheless.
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- Mutandanstan - 08/26/2009
- Why not set it in the present? like 'her skin [is] flawless'^^sounds cooler to me
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