One's True Fate (1)

• Artist: Strawberry-Kinz
• Description: I thought about making a book with me and my crushes to see if I am good enough so this is the sneak peek AND first chapter. Should I continue?
  
  Me=Zoey
  Bare=Daniel
  Logan=Jake
  Sophie=Cat
  John=Christian
  Tyler=Andy
  Russel=Robert
  Baby Girl=Alexis
• Date: 10/04/2009
• Tags: ones true fate

I sit in math, longing for it to be over to go to lunch, but there is 1 good part. Seeing Jake sitting there everyday with his warm blue eyes staring everywhere, like a new born kitten wandering it's first walk in the world. I also notice my bff sitting next to him, Sophie. He is soo adorable!, I thought to myself as we are putting away our planners and math books. All of a Sudden,"DDDIIINNGGGGG!" as we race to the door, eager to get out. I see Sophie rising from her seat wearing her usual outfit, T-Shirt, Blue jeans and a hoodie. I walk over to her and I say " Hey Sophie". " He is soo weird' She replies. I ask her why he is weird. " He act's so stupid and weird" she says. Then I say in a replying sarcastic tone" You're the weird one, Sophie" I say laughing and being happy as she join's in. " I know" she says in a sassy voice. We walk our way to lunch, chatting about our previous periods and how we will dread the upcoming ones. We walk into the cafeteria, not surprised by the long lines. We head toward our friends, Christian, Andy, Robert and Alexis. Sophie walk's up and say's "Hey people" she says in a normal tone. I walk up to the line closest to our spot's and see Christian hugging and hanging all over Alexis. Sophie walk's up and when she look's at Christian hugging Alexis, she put's her head down in depression. " Your bugged, arent you?" I ask her." No! I'm not bugged!" as i evily grin as she answered too quickly.

~ Please read the next chapter, Also, add me if you want another chapter~

Comments

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

Okaaayy. A few little pointers:
1) When a new character speaks, you press ENTER.
2) When there is a change of scene or a break in the story, you press ENTER.
3) When you introduce characters, you do it SLOWLY.
4) You spell out ONE instead of writing 1.
5) You proof read. (Spelling, Grammar and oh, I don't know, PARAGRPAHING?)

That's all,

Overworked~

[Mekofox]

Madison...I can't help but wonder...HOW DO YOU KNOW ME SO WELL??!! You know thats exacly what I do! Also Wear everyday!...I luvs ya. (This is the girl Sophie) Yes...I am really that weird...just wait 'till you hear all the rest of the things I do! Muhahahhha XD

[1mkatie]

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