Kayla's Outing

• Artist: l2iza
• Description: Okay, I have no idea how to give this thing a title, but anyways.
  I used this when i was Role Playing. And, I just wondering... I was good?
  You know... Er. That was earlier in the year when I wrote it... so I would guess I'm a little better, but so how could i improve it? My grandma thought it was well written. o-o;;
  And so you know! Well, I suppose it does matter, but since I'm 12... do you think it was well done for my age?
• Date: 11/08/2009
• Tags: wintery snow silence

Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:34 pm

Kayla decided it was time to visit her mom and wish her a Happy New Year. She slid on her coat and a scarf and headed out into the snowy wind. Her father was still sleeping so she left a note on the fridge just in case he wondered where she was. The snowy silence calmed the whole town the only sound there was, was the occasional howl of the wind and the snow crunching beneath her feet. Even though the sun was coming out, it felt as if it was getting cooler by the minute. Kayla followed the path she always did. The path that traveled through the cold patches of trees and followed the frozen river. She watched her breath enter the stiff and frozen air and give away into the cold atmosphere.