From Me to You

• Artist: KatiaynaTheCrazy
• Description: This is my story hope it somehow scares or excites you i was told to write this for a class so here it is >:D~
• Date: 11/28/2009
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It is dark out memories flood into your head.You stare at the building looming ahead.What What is that you say?You do not know why you are here?Well mabye this will jog your memorie

You are cordially invited to our how you say "Housewarming" Party
have fun im sure you'll have the time of your "Life" -Hotel Manager

You enter the deserted home... Rats scurry on the ground the smell of death is strong in the air.The wind howls like the souls in this place waiting...Wanting to reach that everlasting light.You see the elevator the scene replays itself in your mind The laugh...And the scream of the child all fill your head.You hear a noise you turn sharply around a figure blocks your path...The world goes black...You are dead nothing more to say...

Comments

[Bolexle]

This would be great if you went through and fixed the grammar and spelling errors. It made it almost unreadable. Almost, but not quite. Very dark, I like.

[xx lonergirl_11 xx]

whoa.,
Was a person cursed coz I'm dead?
Did someone I hurt made an OFFICIAL CONTRACT WITH EMMA AI, THE HELLGIRL?!

Nice story, though...
Love it when a character dies and trails off mysteriously.,

[KatiaynaTheCrazy]

i Sometimes scare myself with all the things i write...