Girl stuck in a Cage

• Artist: littleangel551
• Description: I made this writing after i mad an avatar for it >.< i hope u like both of 'em :D
• Date: 04/27/2010
• Tags: girl stuck cage

There once was a girl named Angeline,how this girl loved animals!!!She loved them so much,that she lived next to a forest,and every morning she came to the forest to play with her feline and bird friends. smile But one day, as she woke up to get ready to go to the forest she noticed something different...Her bird friends didnt sing, and her feline friends werent purring...She ran out of her house and right away when she had just set foot onto the forest path.....Everything...It was gone...the trees were smashed and the nests were ruined,the caves and dens have crumbled....And in the middle of all that....A girl...in tattered clothes...crying her tears out...The girl apparently was also an animal lover,Angeline went to help the girl.The girl was so frightened...She kept yelling,"NO!!!DONT!!!PLZ,ANYTHING!!!DONT HURT THE ANIMALS,DONT TAKE THEM!!!NOOOO!!!" crying Angeline tried asking the girl did she see wat took them??? But by then, the girl had some how dissappeared...
Seeing this,Angeline went to search for her friends,and the girl,she went on looking roud and round the forests...untill finally...She noticed a huge castle that she never noticed there before...So as Angeline stepped in...She saw that the girl was sitting in the middle of the castle..still crying...Then Angeline ran to her, but as Angeline step foot into the castle,a golden cage fell on her... Then in front of her eyes...The girl transformed into a evil dragon...The dragon was actually a boy too....:/ The dragon said marry him and the animals would be free...The girl was about to say yes,but instead the animals said no,they would rather live with her then live in a forests without her...So on and on the girl lives with her animal friends in the golden cage,the dragon watching their every move,and waiting for the girl's answer...

Comments

[Black_and_BlueRoses143]

i like it!!^^ 4/5

[littleangel551]

not rlly ^.^" i was just writing the story...not interested in being a writer sweatdrop does anyone no wat the sparkly stuff on my clothes are???

[Archaic Druid]

If you have any plans on being a serious writer, It is absolutely crucial that you refrain from using ridiculous amounts of punctuation (e.g. "???" "!!!" "..." over and over). Also, interest is lost as soon as the reader lays eyes on the three most cliche words in existence "There once was".