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The Inbetween
Prologue
She was burning. Flames licking hungrily at her flesh as she plummeted through the air. Her screams were drowned out by the roar of the wind that rushed by her ears. She had been waiting for this day to come for hundreds of years; she had anticipated it eagerly, wanting to pass on the gift of life to the next of her kind. But now that she was finally there with fire scorching her entire body, burning her flesh and wings, she wished that it didn't have to happen at all. But for the next Phoenix to rise, one had to die. And it was her turn.
Another scream was torn from her lips as she flipped through the air, trying to get her wings to cooperate so she could land on the ground, but with her feathers quickly being burned away in the flames, she couldn't. She sucked in a quick intake of air as she spotted the ground far beneath her. Far, but coming ever closer. She squeezed her eyes shut, praying for the whole ordeal to end quickly because she didn't know if she could take the pain any longer.
Suddenly, her body hit the ground. The flames hissed around her, and she pried her eyes open to see that the fire was slowly vanishing. It took her a moment to realize that she had landed in water and that she was quickly sinking, her wings not being made for such a use. Her head sank beneath the surface, and though she struggled desperately, she couldn't get back up to where the air was.
She floated there for a moment, her burned but mostly intact wings threatening to tug her even further towards the bottom of the lake. She could see the sun, a small twinkle far above her, and oh, how she wanted to go towards it, to leave her watery grave. But she knew that she would die; she had always known that, ever since her birth from the ashes of the Phoenix before her. But...this wasn't how it was supposed to happen. This mistake would break the chain that had gone had millenia before her.
Lungs aching, she closed her eyes and breathed in.
- by mythological irony |
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- | Submitted on 06/24/2010 |
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- Title: The Inbetween (Prologue)
- Artist: mythological irony
- Description: This is a story that I actually started years ago, but it never really went anywhere. But just recently I've been getting ideas, so I decided to try and start it back up again. This proluge is actually a new part, so I haven't really worked out all the kinks yet or how it completely fits with the rest. I have a general idea, but...I'm not really sure yet.
- Date: 06/24/2010
- Tags: phoenix monster inbetween prologue novel
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Comments (3 Comments)
- mythological irony - 07/04/2010
- Thank you! :3
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- XCynicalX - 07/04/2010
- This is a great topic! I love what you picked! And your style is nice. It has a lot of flow with the sentence structure, great word choice, description, and overall theme. Well done.
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- xXxSexyHeartBreakerxXx - 06/26/2010
- Thats a great peice of writing
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