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Chapter one
"Ring, ring, ring" repeats the telephone. "Ring, ring ,ring" "Hello." answers an officer from the Miami police department. "Officer" says a 30 year old woman. "Theres a guy creeping around my house and he won't leave." "Ok ma'am, tell me where you live and we'll come over as soon as possible" responds the officer. "Um, i live on 4469 Maple Leaf Drive North. Please Hurry."
"(Sounds in the background) bang, bang, bang, crash" "Officer he's in the house" the terrified woman cries. "Ok, well be right there. Hold on."
"Theres been a break-in, i have to get there quick." "OK" says the sherrif. "I'll come with you."
"Oh, man I think we're too late. Let's check out the crime scene." "Alright." When the officers get in the house they see an outline of blood, but her body isn't there. "The body's missing?" "I guess so."
They take time to think about the situation. "Ok let's put some tape around the house and secure this place." Soon after they secure the place, they call inspector Chad Hamilton. "Hello, Mr. Hamilton?" "Yes" "We have a break-in/murder and we need you to come investigate the case." "Ok, I'll be right over."
When Chad gets to her house, he inspects the front yard, backyard, and in her house. He finds that she had a stream in her backyard and decides to insoect it.
Chad finds that there is no trace of blood, but there is a hair scrunchy on the shore of the stream. He picks it up and finds that there is blood on the scrunchie and puts it in a bag for evidence. Chad walks back to the house and inform the police officers that she has died in the stream and we need somebody to follow that stream. "Ok, were on it."
2 days later, police find a boatorist and have him drive down the stream with Chad. "What's that ahead?" the boatorist asked. "It looks like what we've been looking for. Her body." "Drive up to it so we can get a better look." When the boat get to the body, Chad reaches for the body and flips it over. " It's just a dummy" says the boatorist. "It looks like were messing with an expert here. One who knows all the tricks in the detective area. He just let us right where we started; with nothing.
:End of chapter one:
- Title: The Criminal
- Artist: machito98
- Description: Well, a story i put together. ITS ALL THE CSI IN MY HEAD! XD stars it ups!
- Date: 08/19/2010
- Tags: criminal
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