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DETECTIVE TALES: Story of Noir
CASE FILE: 001
Suspect: Tony Ziollini
Tony Ziollini, the leader of the MAFIA in the current year of 1923. He was acussed of many crimes, but the police could never track him. He was too quick, too crafty, and too dangerous. He is also Noir's next target. Noir has been after him for a month now, with no track or idea on where Tony is. So that brings us to now . . .
Noir was currently on a steakout in New York , looking for any of Tony's goons. He faced a couple, and interragated them, but no anwsers. Noir when inside a cafe for a little break. He was tired. He was trying to find Tony or one of his goons all day. He sat down at the counter, and bought some coffee. As he was sitting, he saw a suspicous man with an envolpe he got from the back room. He waited for the man to leave. When he did, Noir sprange out of his chair and quickly followed that man. The man behind the counter try to say something to Noir " Are'nt you going to drink your coffee?". Noir ran out the door and looked around for the man. He saw him down a dark alley across the street from the cafe. Noir went across the street and followed the man down that alley. He was now behind the man. Noir acedentally stepped on a cola can. The man turned around, he saw nothing behind him. Then where was Noir? He was right above him, 3 stories abouve him! Noir was blancing himself on a pipeline connected from one building to another. Noir jumped off. As he was falling, he aimed himself to fall onto of the man. He fell right on top of him, which knocked the man out cool. He searched him, and found that note. That note contained the location of Tony's secrect hideout. He was located on a zepplin in the sky. Now Noir understands why that zepplin he saw ealier this month was here. Noir knew he could'nt get to the zepplin on foot, but he had another plan. He went back to his house, went in his room, opened the closet in his room, and he moved the clothes that were hanging there. There was a small key slot. Noir took out his key and placed it in the lock, then he unlocked it. After he did that, the wall opened up automatical, revealing a passage into a secret room. He went down that passage. Ahead, was a large room that looked like a runway for a plane. At the end of it was a big openeing, you could see the whole city. There was a big wardrobe in the room. Noir went to the wardrobe and opened it. Inside was a metal backpack with gears and bolts. He put it on, and then he ran though the big opening. He was falling about 11 stories high! Then when he pressed a button on his pack, metal wings popped out, and they started flapping. He was now flying, like a bird in the sky! He could control the wings like if they where attached to him. He could see the whole city from his point of view. He flew right past the Empire State Building. Circled around the Cryslier Building, and though central park. He was close to the zepplin now, but he heard open fire! Seems like they saw Noir coming. guns where firing in all dierections, but Noir was to fast. He manuvered in some insane loops. Plus, he did'nt get one bullet in him. He landed on a platform underneath the zepplin. Men with pistols where aiming right at him. He was a goner, or isn't he. He pressed another button on his pack. Then his pack transformed around him. He was now covered in a suit of armor. The men started shotting. His suit was rechochet, so the bullets reflected off of his armor, and onto the triggermen. They all got shot by there own bullet! Noir continued up a flight of stairs leading to the inside. He went up the stairs. He saw a door there. It was locked, so Noir kicked it down and entered the room ahead. He saw Tony. He was opperating a Gunnery turrent! His rechochet is not powerful enough to withstand a weapon like that. He went for cover. Tony was now shotting like a mad man. Noir had to think, and quick. Then he got it! He used his grappling hook, and shot it at a platform on the top part of the roof. He zipped up there. Tony saw, and was now shotting upwards. He was still shotting crazily. Noir hid, because thats all he had to do. Then the zepplin was going down, why? Because, on top of them was the blimp, the ballon supporting flight. Since Tony popped it with his gun shots he was trying to kill Noir with, while he was on the top! The whole place was going to crash. There was a window the room Noir was in. He jumped down from his platform, and jumped though the window. He free falled a bit, then he deployed his wings, which means the armor was transformed back into a pack. He was safe in the sky. When the zepplin crashed. Noir flew right by it. Tony was still alive and came out of the zepplin. So, Noir swopped by him and snacthed him, and flew him to the police station. When he got there,he went inside to the cell rooms. He threw him into a cell, and locked it. The Chief of Police thanked him for putting Tony behind bars. The next day, The city honored him for locking up the meanest rat in the sewer and making New York City a safer place to live. Thanks to Noir, The Greatest Detective In The World!
- by Agim Xhemaili |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/01/2010 |
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- Title: DETECTIVE TALES: STORY OF NOIR
- Artist: Agim Xhemaili
- Description: A detective trying to catch a leader of the mafia in the year 1923.
- Date: 10/01/2010
- Tags: detective tales story noir
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