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Everything I touch has fallen away
This is because I am no longer there
I am on a journey home
I'll miss my family as they will miss you
I loved them as they loved me
I am saddened that I have to leave them behind
For I know I'll be missed greatly
I'll know I'll never get the chance to hold, kiss or say I love you
to them again
For this journey will be my last
- by starlightlynn30 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Fallen
- Artist: starlightlynn30
- Description: A poem in memory of my mother
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: fallen
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Comments (6 Comments)
- KaTz Evans - 06/03/2011
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5 stars!!!!!
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- I Like to Eat Faces - 11/29/2009
- You don't need to use "I am" or "this is because" make it more abstract and it will be perfect wink
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- Zelaria - 08/02/2009
- That was so.... well it is so..... I LOVED IT!
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- Amor Profondo - 04/28/2009
- I really like it. 5
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- Unraveled Enigma - 03/30/2009
- man thats sounds like something i feel sometimes when life hits me in the face 5 stars
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- AlesanaLover - 01/12/2009
- aw that is so sad, I like it.
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