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Blue, green
No, gray.
Blink. Shiver.
Why? It’s cold.
Pink fuzzy slippers.
Stomp.
Stomp.
Glass. Metal.
Window frame.
Doom.
I remember.
From a long time ago.
In a place far from here.
Two people, male and female.
Frozen, intertwined in each other’s embrace
The couple that begot me.
Frozen for life. For Death.
In that cold, white substance.
That brings joy.
That brings happiness.
25th December.
Today.
Turn away.
From the darkness. The light.
And Remember, little one.
Saint Nickolas.
Holly. Mistletoe.
And snow.
The forgiveness. The Happiness.
Forget the past.
And love.
I see you playing in the snow with your friends.
And I smile.
Merry Christmas.
- by ChibiEmperor |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: My Love Sprung From My Hate
- Artist: ChibiEmperor
- Description: it's a person, who lived in a cold country in his/her childhood. S/he remembers that her/his parents died frozen, and contradicts him/herself about her true feelings about christmas and the snow. Then s/he tells her/his little one not to forget the true feelings of Christmas and the poem ends with the parent getting over the trauma, seeing his/her child happy within the snow.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: only love sprung from hate
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Comments (4 Comments)
- XxBrisonXx - 09/06/2009
- THAT WAS THE GREATEST POEM I HEARD #1.
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- PUNK_xp_rocks - 06/06/2009
- it's very heavy but it has it's points of veiw
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- Fancy heavenly-angel - 02/05/2009
- It sounds good
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- emeraldpuppy9 - 12/29/2008
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it was a little confusing at first but ur description cleared things up. all in all, it was a great poem =]
5/5 <3 - Report As Spam