- There were two girls who loved each other. The younger one is named julia and the other one is justine. Their parents were so happy that they have two beautiful children. So they went to the mall and watched a movie to celebrate and have bonding time together when they were just 2 months old. But they dont know there is virus in the air. Justine have stronger resistance but julia dont. Now julia cant walk nor talk. She is a baby forever.The family suffered with financial problems because her madicine was too costly. Then one day, the lights went out. There was a terrible rain with matching lightning and thunder. Julia is suffering another pain that isnt known where. She kept crying and crying. Then justine puled out a knife. With her tears all over her face. Just after 3 hits her face is covered with blood. The blood of an innocent child that she trully loved.
- by kyouku-chan |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/27/2009 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kittyki_890 - 12/28/2009
- nothing to special but keep trying you'll get there with no doubt smile
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- ElectraShocked - 06/10/2009
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You mean this actually happened to you in real life....?
Check out some of my entries. - Report As Spam
- Dalton01Baby - 03/25/2009
- miss spelled words incomplete sentences and it could be longer but blood and guts is not gonna do make me cry or hurl keep trying though 3/5
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- xXxDawnWillComexXx - 03/25/2009
- Its really good...but sad...so sad. I give yo 5/5
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- kitties n unicorns - 03/18/2009
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lol
justine..-_-'
ok..i give you 5
heart
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- kyouku-chan - 03/07/2009
- ohh. this is my first time you see. i'll make somthing better but still depressing. this story is part of my life...weird huh?
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- meerodi - 03/07/2009
- ... well that was depressing. Do you just sit around and think of sad stories like this? lol, jk. I tought it was pretty good, though you need to work on making it more, you know, readable.
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