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Rosemary Walked down the long, dark hall. She never did look back because she was afriad what she might come to see. *flicker Flicker* as the lights went. she started to walk faster but it seemed that the darkness around her was coming right behind her. The Lights completly turned off... She scremed and started to run not knowing were she was going. She slamed into a wall and the lights turned back on. She noticed the hallway had changed.... The doors were gone and the back of the hall was pitch black. She started walking, almost running. She heard a scream... There was one door in the middle of the hall. She heard the scream again, it was coming from the door. She slighty turned the handle. She was sweating terribly. The door creeked open and inside was a girl no older than 5 years old. The little girled stared at her as she walked in. The girl said in a soft voice "im scared, help me." The Girl looked at the closet. The Closet started to raddle and move. Rosemary motioned toward the closet. she reached for the handle. Inside was a dead body. There was blood still leaking at the body's head. Rosemary screamed. She looked back at the girl, but she wasn't there. Rosemary looked around the room, but the girl was nowere in sight. She started to hear the door open. Rosemary looked at the door, but before she could catch a glimsps at who it was she fell to the ground bleeding from the neck..... Dead. The Small girl appeared and said softly to the body "Sweet dreams..." The little girl walked out of the room knife still in hand and vanished...
Author's Note: The Hallway is Called "The Faliure Of Rose" Uhm The Girls Name Is ylime Esor (Look at backwards) And Rosemary Died Becuase the girl cut her throat open... The Body was a destraction and one of her previous victims. There Is Only 1 way Inside "The Faliure Of Rose" but theres no way out. There will be a part 2 =)
- by Final Nightmares |
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- | Submitted on 10/04/2008 |
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- Title: Rosemary's Demise
- Artist: Final Nightmares
- Description: Scary.. Read it
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: rosemarys demise
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- l Ginger Cakes l - 03/14/2009
- Wow.Very good!
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- sanoia - 03/12/2009
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- A fire on the snow - 03/12/2009
- Excellent!!! I would love more!! ^.^
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- Fries And A Milkshake - 12/13/2008
- zomg...i love it!
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- Final Nightmares - 10/05/2008
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- iopen1 - 10/04/2008
- MHM great job 5/5
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- Yoko the Thief - 10/04/2008
- woah...that was freaky...and amazing. good job!
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