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In Seth’s Room
=chapter 1=
“Hey,” says a cafeteria woman. “Hey, boy… sir… hey you, next…are you going to move. Pay your lunch!!” Yelled the woman this time. I was wakened from a deep long day dream that I was in for the last few days. But lately, they’ve been worse. I pace myself to the older woman whose bags under her eyes, and messy uniform tell me that she woke up too late to go to work, had to rush, and has no time or patience to be waiting on a boy like me. A boy with mid-cut or “skater” dark brown hair, with a slightly tan complexion, wearing black jeans and a band tee that says ,’I want you to know’ on the front and ‘I’ll be thinking of you…’ Suicide Black tee. I paid for my lunch and now head to another table, one that’s so empty you can feel the cold air surround you because no one’s there. No one’s there to talk, to eat, or even relax. Not one single soul except for mine.
“Loner!” says a jock walking down the hallway laughing. He pushed me out of his way into a girl, but not just any old girl. What’s her name, she’s so beautiful. “Sorry.” She says as she walks by acting as if nothing just happened. I had to turn around. My eyes followed her until she went around the corner. I must know her name. “s**t,” I said as I realized I was heading towards the wrong class. New marking period, new exploratory classes. I glance at my paper as the warning bell rings. English, Math, Reading, Science, there it is, Drama. God, why do I always get these crappy classes? Drama Room 7A. I look up and head towards the stairs, unprepared for what was about to happen.
=Chapter 2=
The bell rang before I got to the 3rd floor. I never make it to class before the stupid bell rings why? As I walk down the hallway it seems like it gets narrower. 510, 59, 58, damn, how long will it take to get to the class?? 6z, 6x, 6y, it really does look like everything’s getting smaller and smaller…what’s wrong with my brain? I try to calm down but my heart keeps beating faster and faster, why, am I having anxiety attacks? If I am…what is it about? 7D, 7c, 7B, 7A, finally! I take a deep breathe and start to ease the door open and slide through the door. Every eyes on me, you can’t hear a single thing except for the music coming out of my head phones ‘…I can feel you touch…cant get you out of my clutch..breaking away…’I look around and don't see a single seat open. "Ahhhhh..." says a slanky women coming out of a dark corner. SO you must be Mr.Roberts, please follow me..." Confused and curious for what she has in store for me i follow her. "Quickly!" she yells."We cant let the class wait on you because you decide to not come on time. Besides... Why were you late?" She stopped at a desk and took out a paper studied it for a while and peered at the quiet boy. At the same time she lowered her glasses. He was just standing htere silent and still. "Seth? Yes, thats correct, why cant you answer me?" Her gaze met Seths face and towrds the class then back to her paper."I was coming up the stairs when the bell rang and i forgot that we had new classes today." I mumbled under my breath. "What did you say? You know, its very bad to mumble, it can become a very bad habit." The class giggled;now he definatly isnt going to say anything loud. Seth mumbled again, "I was coming up the staairs when the bell rang & i forgot that we had new classes today." "Can you please speak up?" the teacher said louder,"Now, youg man, you can either speak up or get out!" She said whle she was starting to get annoyed at the samet time tapping her foot. Oh great, this just makes my day and i dont want to leave now! He took a deep breathe and opened his mouth, "i was cominng upstaris when the bell rang and i forgot that we had new classes today!" He sarcastially yelled. "My, my,my." The women said, "Take this paper, fill it out, & return it to me." She shoved the papers into his hands and as he started to walk off, "Oh! & by the way your seats over there!" She pointed he bony fingers to the center right side of the class. A single desk that is surrounded by 4 other desks, surrounded by people he doesnt know. Alone, i dont want to meet some one new! God do i really hate this schoool! Seth paced himself to his desk,"Mr.Roberts can you please hurry to your seat? We don't have all day now do we?" Seth's pace got quicker,sick of embarrasment,unsure of how much longer he'll last for. Once he got to his seat he looked around himself, geting glances & stares,smiles, & laughs;still embarrased he slumped down lower and lower into his seat trying to avoid this horrible pain. Why out of all classes did i have to get this one! i don't think ill be able to last long here.He staredat the board "Mrs. Summer" some kind of teacher, Seth watched her move, point and compare Romeo & Juliet with High School Musical. "In some way, students, these are related. . .Can any of you te-. . ." He started to zone her out. "hehehehe," giggled a girl behind him which broke his daze, so he decided to turn around. He slowly turned his head & thrusted his body, all he had was a gasp and a blush. No words could possibly come out of his mouth,words just kept scrambling in his mind, unsure of the perfect words to say. It's not like i can say anything anayways I dont even know her name!!"ummmm...Can i help you?" She said,"Do you have a problem, question or anything??" Seth was paralyzed, still shocked that he was right in front of her, his heart wan't even beating, he just could'nt help but gaze in he beautiful dark brown eyes. Seth just sat there staring. "Hello?....can i help you?" She said once again. Seth tried, but could'nt, no words were comming out of his mouth he tried to from them but they only melted away. "Mrs. Johnson," Mrs. Summers said as i turned around still in a shock,"Mrs.Summers, can you please stop calling me that and say Brionna?" Brionna said as annoyed. "But darling that's only a term of respect you're getting!" She pleaded also annoyed. "Well, then i don't want that respect!" She said. "You tell her Sunshine!" "Yeah, go Bri-Bri," spoke some of the students while seh did her hand shake with her best friend. "Would you like to leave now, or learn about how to be a good actress?" "I-I'll just stay here." Brionna said quickly, sat up, and was ready for anything."And Seth, can you please turn around and pay attention...unless you want to move??" Seth picked up his head and looked back at her. How many times will she do this to me?? Seth took out a peice of paper and looked at it for a while, to make sure that Mrs. Summers wasn't paying attention to him. It only took a while until she stopped focusing on him and went back to her lesson. Seth put the paper in front of him and wrote sorry. He turned his head and gently put it in her hands and turned back around. Brionna leaned foreward and whispered,"what's this??" Seth jumped a little, such a sweet voice, i wouldn't mind-Seths thoughts stopped and he quickly replied "read it." He got the note back and opened it, sorry for what? For bumping into you in the hallway and for gettin you into trouble. Its ohkay im used to it, haha...and what? when did we bump into each other? Earlier remeber when that guy pushed me into you and you just...nevermind! Ohhh, now i remember sorry for the way i responded i just had a problem, but yeah, its ohkay! Are ou sure? Yeah it's ohkay! Hey do you wana- the bell rang just as she going to finish and write. "Bye" She said as she picked up her books and started to walk off. "Bye, see ya around!" "Yeah, see ya." Brionna said as she walked out of the room. Seth got up and slowly got his things together, sad to say he was actually glad that he was put in this class. Still, at the same time wants to get out fo school, the only good thing is to see her, my sunshine.
Seth walked down the crowded hallway thinking of nothing except for her, Brionna. Seth was now walking into his next class. It was seeming to get quiet, the voices began to fade, become muffled, and then silent. He saw the movement of the mouths but no sound was comming out. He glanced to the teacher, saw him point and tap, just talk, and talk, and talk. He could hear nothing until a voice came up, it was hers! Brionna! All Seth could think of was her, nothing but Brionna! "Sorry. .. What's this?. . . Yeah see you later. . ." Her sweet tone that could make even one of the unpuriest most evil things come to the light. She wasn't like any of the other girls, she was different. Her brown eyes lit up the halls, her beautiful dark hair danced behind her. She reminded me of those people you watch on t.v., everywhere they are, people stop to look at them. "Hey, Hey!" A big slam hit the desk, "Man come on, wake up!" As I sat up and wiped the slime off my face he said, "Man you fell asleep during Mr.Pauls lecture and while you was sleep, you called someone name. Did you freak someone yesterday or something?" "No." I said embarrassed, "Oh man, well it's okay then!" I got up and started to leave the room. Saying her name in my sleep, man i lost my mind! "Hey," the boy yelled while he catch up with seth. "What's your name?" "Seth, you?" He said confused, "John, hey man we should chill sometime!" "okay i said and walked off onto the campus and headed towards the fountain. This is crazy!! 1st i see a beautiful girl & talk to her, & then i gain a new friend!"Brionna." I whispered. I saw her only once , and i think that i'm in love. Was I her type or did she like those "built" boys with from their legs to neck...or does she like clean cut boys with waves and everything?? Does she feel the same way?? How did she think we saw each other in the hallway?? Seth got up and headed towards that boy John. And began to talk with him. By the end of the day they were what people say "tight".
CHAPTER 3 && 4 WiLL BE COMING UP SOON!!
(im working on::
Chapters 32 right now ;ppp
its all in a matter of typing this much..-.- sweatdrop )
- by ll W E i R D - G A S M ll |
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- Title: In Seth's Room Chapter 1 & 2
- Artist: ll W E i R D - G A S M ll
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this is a story i started a while ago.. [:
i've gotten a lot of good feed back from it [: so i decided to put it up on here..
PlEASE DONT STEAL my ideas im only 14 -.-'' but i plan to publish it all sooon [:
theres im workin on page 87.. and some grammar might not be good.
this is a really rough copy.. +&&* COMMENT,COMMENT,COMMENT [: - Date: 11/30/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Puppy Arin - 09/09/2009
- i loved it and thought it was great 5/5
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- ll W E i R D - G A S M ll - 12/10/2008
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yh..ur right [:
fhnkyeww for the good feedback..
i plan on typing up the 3 +&& 4th chapter soon sooo..
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- appleslice1340 - 12/08/2008
- A good start, but you really need to look into the spelling and grammar. Also, just looking it over, thinking about it, and writing it again I have found will work wonders. Even if it's amazing the first time, It'll be twice as good the second time.
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- Toxxik-Morbid-Dreams - 11/30/2008
- Great start! ^-^ I luff this too. (:
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- ll W E i R D - G A S M ll - 11/30/2008
- ughh.. i dunno.. i just kinda started.. and movies..and some other things made me wana picture meh own thing.. lolxD
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- The_Revs_Babe93 - 11/30/2008
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wow i love it its so good were did u come up w/ the ideas???
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- StayFit_ - 11/30/2008
- i love it!!
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