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I walked down on 31st street, a quaint little shop caught my eye, "come in come in," he said in a gentle tone, the door opening with a jingle, without sin.
I took in the sights of the shop, the smells, the sensations, wherever I looked, beauty stared back, elegance sitting on each and every rack.
Then a cold trickling came down my back, gushing as a sharp pain stabbed into my spine, the cold steel death harbinger slicing down the tender skin of mine. I collapsed as all became black, I stared up one last time, to meet my maker, with the last of my life, and without slack, I took the knife, and he was stabbed twice.
As I awakened I found myself walking to the gates of hell. There was no shop, nothing to sell. There I saw him "Ladies first" he said. I replied,"and whoever said chivalry was dead" I took a step forward, then looked back, he stood there smiling, not a peep, so I thought "what a creep"
I decided and turned back, flipped him over and as the gates crack,
he fell into the great abyssal, screaming in pain, that part of the show, was the main.
I turned around, and walked back, there I found a light shining, going up, the light brightening, I stepped in, having forgiven my every sin.
"Up and up and up" I said, the light a rainbow of blue and green and red.
And as the warmth embraced, I felt the life return in haste. as I returned from the cold hard floor, and went through the hospital door.
"he's dead," they said, as I awoke. I immediately thought, "Pfft. What a joke."
I smiled, a knowledge that only I could bring. A voice in my head began to sing, "Come in, come in, without a sin. The shop which you so adored, is now yours and only yours."
Death had passed on his legacy, and I found myself with a new tendency.
"Come in, come in," I said with a gentle grin,
As the fair maiden entered again.
- by Luna Lux Lucis Angelus |
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- | Submitted on 07/01/2009 |
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- Title: Shop of Death
- Artist: Luna Lux Lucis Angelus
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hehe....it was really just a random inspiration strike, this is my first entry in arenas, be nice please > . <
I am aware of the part that says adores instead of adore. Its on purpose. I changed it for the sake of rhyming. - Date: 07/01/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Luna Lux Lucis Angelus - 07/29/2009
- tehehe. yeah its pretty interesting, I like it alot though o:
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- blasphemy3113 - 07/29/2009
- I remember reading this when you first made it, It kinda sent a chill down my spine. ^^;;
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- Luna Lux Lucis Angelus - 07/28/2009
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thanks again x w x
Its sorta...it was my first entry into arenas ^.^;;
but I still consider it my favorite ahaha. - Report As Spam
- Lilith Celestine17 - 07/04/2009
- It's impressive.
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- Luna Lux Lucis Angelus - 07/02/2009
- thankies >w<
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- Sexy Suigetsu - 07/02/2009
- i like it biggrin
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