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Kenshi ran threw the forest, the floor lit with blood. There was a black night sky, as Kenshi's feet hit the floor, the blood squirted everywhere across his chest. His eyes widened, as a speckle of hot blood fell on the iris. As he fell to the floor, Kenshi turned around. A young girl with a Machete, shrouded in darkness, she beckoned. ''Kenshi. Don't be afraid. Come here.'' The girl said innocently, as she then burst out in manic laughter. Lifting her Machete, there was a large thud.
Kenshi awoke, his face covered in sweat. It was the weekend, 2:00 AM. In the town of Hiwizawa, a desolate town in japan. Kenshi stood to see if he was still sane, as he stood, looking threw the window. He opened it, as a gust of wind pierced him, Kenshi closed it, afraid, as the wind whistled outside. Kenshi was shaking, as was his brown scruff of hair. Kenshi needed some comfort, as he headed down the dark stairs into the sitting room. Turning on the old fashioned Japanse TV, The new's flashed on. It was cheap, it was head lined by : Hiwizawa village news. A blue flash was across the screen. It was never on, apart from announcing something like a new flower was discovered in the forest. Kenshi starred at the blue screen, shaking. The screen somehow burst with life, as there was no voice in the background. Just a picture of a girl, her eyes were closed, as all you could see was her head. A puddle remained around her, it was blood. Kenshi gasped, as if something was caught in his throat. Kenshi fell into the wall, pushing the table over, as the plant pot smashed everywhere. Another headline appeared. : Okiuo, the flower shop's eldest daughter was CUT IN HALF and was found as all her limbs were dismembered. Kenshi fell over in the corner, switching off the television. Then, a ruthless bang was at the door. Kenshi shakely walked out of his japanse sitting room, into the hall. Another Knock. A BANG BANG BANG , as he opened the door a crack, a leaf blowed threw the window. He opened it, no one was there. Just a thick fog. Footsteps, a disturbing noise, and...
SOMETHING EMERGED FROM THE SHADOWS.
Mionay, His sister burst threw the darkness. Walking past him, She said '' Hello Kenshi.'' Mionay said, mystreiously. Kenshi ran after her, closing the door. They stopped half way down the corridor. ''Mion..what are you doing up this late? why were you out?'' Kenshi asked. Mionay narrowed her eyes and mouth. ''I could ask you the same thing.''
Kenshi ran to the foot of the stairs were she now stood. ''Mion-'' He stuttered, and was interupted. ''Goodnight Kenshi.'' She said, as she left Kenshi gasping at the bottom of the stairs.
- by LibidoNeko |
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- | Submitted on 12/22/2009 |
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- Title: Blood Stain[]Part one.
- Artist: LibidoNeko
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Description:
A Creepy story I decided to make. The begining, is not so creepy, but oh well.
Its a horror.
About rated for brave twelve year olds or over. - Date: 12/22/2009
- Tags: blood stain part
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Comments (1 Comments)
- gaelic_twilight - 12/22/2009
- Well, since its only the first part, can't say anything about the storyline. THe grammar is okay, but you repeat Kenshi's name too much and there are some spelling mistakes. Also, we can tell from the name that the characters are Japanese, so you don't need to mention it again when you're describing the room, it makes you look a little anime-obsessed.
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