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James sat up and smoothed his slick black hair.
“What do you mean?”
I clenched my fists angrily. Screw staying calm.
“You burst into my closet, lie your way into my house, and make my aunt cry! Now, what the h*ll do you think you’re playing at?”
James sighed deeply.
“I think you should sit down,” he said quietly.
“Why would-”
“Reinette,” James pleaded, rubbing his forehead.
I crossed my legs and plopped down on the hardwood floor.
Whatever. Right now I just really needed answers.
“You know how earlier I said I was a secret?”
“Yeah.”
Where exactly was this going again?
“Well I am. Secret isn’t my status, it’s my species.”
I nodded.
“Okay.”
Acquiesce the lunatic.
James frowned.
“You don’t believe me.”
“Well do you really expect me to?”
James grinned weakly.
“Want me to prove it?”
“Of course,” I challenged.
Maybe now he would come to terms with his own in…
I stopped. In mid-thought I just stopped. I could hear the beating of my heart to the light tapping
of the Starling outside my window. I could hear James’s heart, but it beat too slowly, and didn’t seem to follow any particular pattern.
“Convinced?” a voice asked.
It echoed strangely as if it was neither a spoken word, nor a thought. It was also painfully loud, like a madman had gotten a hold of a megaphone and decided to scream bloody murder into my ear.
I looked over at James. He smiled, and the world sped up again. Logical thought continued.
I wrung my hands together to keep them from shaking.
“What’s a Secret?”
- Title: Secrets (Chapter 5)
- Artist: Yan Qi
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Secrets: Chapter 5.
Please R&R&C! ^^ - Date: 01/03/2010
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Comments (3 Comments)
- KikuMizu - 01/31/2010
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(To Yan Qi) And if that wasn't thought of (what is discussed below) it might be a good idea to touch upon, as an improvement.
Aw...I thought James' hair would have been a light tan. That's what I thought of when he was released from the closet.
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- KikuMizu - 01/31/2010
- (talking to Ink Black) Well, if you think about it from a creative perspective, he might have made the enviroment more sensitive to hearing, though I would agree that an explination should come in soon. How he can prove he is a secret through his heartbeat may be if Ro (Sorry, forgot the rest) compared it to her own heartbeat. Humans, no matter how athletic, cannot get below a certain beat so if his heart was at about, say, 30 BPM, he wouldn't be able to be conscious if he was human.
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- Euphoriafly - 01/03/2010
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1) How would she be able to hear his heartbeat and
2) How would that prove that he was a "Secret"
but other than that i really like this story so far - Report As Spam