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Dreams-
They say a person needs just three things to be truly happy in this world.
Someone to love, something to do and something to hope for.
My Dream-
If it were all up to me-The poor would have riches.
The blind man would see.
The hungry would eat.
The thirsty would drink.
The deaf person hear.
The weak would be strong.
The people with hatred would all get along.
The unfriendly people would start to care.
The ones who are greedy would start to share.
The sorrow and sadness would all disappear.
And that is how the world would be if it were all up to me.
- by HunnyRox17 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Dreams
- Artist: HunnyRox17
- Description: what people need most and its what i think
- Date: 07/16/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- HOPE_BUTTERFLY - 06/21/2009
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wouldnt dat be great?
o well - Report As Spam
- gabby82 - 04/18/2009
- i just love your stoy beacuse it sounds great.
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- Redreap - 12/23/2008
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Interesting ideals... Biggest problem is that it should be in Poetry/Lyrics.
Misplaced - 1/5 - Report As Spam
- HunnyRox17 - 12/01/2008
- true but then there will be NO wars and everyone will get along!
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- Intertwined Love - 07/16/2008
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the second part rhymes which i think is a pretty good poem.
remember this is non-fic.
but i really like your point of this whole dreams thing.
good job =] - Report As Spam
- Clyde Mcfierce - 07/16/2008
- If that is how the world would be then everyone would be "perfect" and everything would fall into a kind of sick euphoria
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