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"Cage"
I hate that word more then i hate humans and there loud machines. I flicked my eyes to the dim lit cage infront of me, A small terrier named pox's glared back. I narowed my eyes into the perfact glare and felt pox's gaze look away and i smiled, My ears flicked cacthing the thunders booming of the iron door as it slamed shut, Then the sent as the humans lumpered by. I sighed and pressed myself against the wall, I looked diffrent i am a jet black husky/wolf with icy blue eyes, eveyone else were ether preaty or sharper looking then me. I stayed still easily fooling the humans into passing me, I couldint care less about the burning hunger i felt.
"TOM!" The mournful cry begain as i wacthed the humans drag the dog away to his doom and i smiled 'Thats what you get for beliveing this hell is hevan' I thought to myself as the loud bang from the door faded off the crys continude. I admite, I used to be like them once... A long time ago when i had partners with me, Before the Humans took them from me leaveing me alone with all the glareing eyes. I choughed a laugh and had all the glareing eyes on me again, Pox's the small terrer seemed to stand taller now with anger.
"What!" i whiped back before anyone could anser i lots my temper again, I glared into the floor
"What do you think he's really comeing back?" I growled and pox's flinched at the questoin and i could see he was on my side on this one. The room feel silent leaveing the faint sound of driping water
"He will come back" A choaked voice bravly spoke and i laughed harshly, Turning the idea of humans bringing him back away
"Is that what you say for all the others that were never seen again?" I asked and knew there was no way to anser my questoin and this time the raspy laughter broke in, I gussed who it was and was right
"Thay took you and brought you back!" The raspy voice mocked my questoin and sudenly I felt stupied, the other voices picked up into a chanting laughter... It hurt me to go throw this all the time but i had to inorder to free my mind from the words of my family...
"And so what!" I manged to raise my voice and shut eveyone up that made me smile, now i knew i had conered myself and wanted nothing more then to fad away then get the same lecture again
"We are the chosen ones, This is dog hevan and we all get a chance, The humans are freeing them from there old lifes to be reborn into a better one" He rasped and the dogs barked in agreement, I snorted 'HOW could they think HELL was HEVAN! most of these mutts dont belive that theres anthor world outside thats better then this' My mind screamed and i had to stop listineing before i went up the wall, I shooke my head and mumbled cruses under my breath before i rested faceing the wall with a sigh i closed my eyes and drowned out the voices...
TO BE CONITUDE.....
- by ninjadog34 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/05/2008 |
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- Title: Cringe
- Artist: ninjadog34
- Description: I'm wrighting this book to open animal test labs eyes and see what there doing to troture animals and i'm trying to make a change, Please keep in mind that it is a dog speaking and not a human, Please rate.
- Date: 10/05/2008
- Tags: cringe
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Raspberry Muffin_xx - 02/05/2009
- Im a spelling freak! And i like the whole idea snd stuff, but dude, spelling is everything!!
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- jaciopara tempppp - 12/21/2008
- I love you, I love the story and the idea. I'm going to send this to my cousin, she's like you too, she'll go nuts~ Awesome Short.
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- The Azure Quincy - 12/12/2008
- I like the idea behind it, but it's kinda hard to read because there's lots of spelling and grammar errors. In certain places, I couldn't tell who is talking. You may want to elaborate on what they actually do to the animals; what the dog actually sees and hears. It's kinda left vague there. But I like the fact that the dogs see this is "heaven," and this one dog sees it as hell, but don't bring religion into it unless that's your point
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- Tsuki Angel Ninna - 10/06/2008
- Nice
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- wrym the anarchist - 10/05/2008
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Sorry to mention this, but you need to correct a bunch of spelling...
for instance, the word is writing, not wrighting, there is no gh in that word... and conitude is supposed to be spelt continued... But thats all really. - Report As Spam
- Ami Kaioke - 10/05/2008
- good details and good writing but you should try to make ur writing to capture someone's attention, i guess u should of made it something that we keep wanting to read its good thought i was hoping to make it more interesting i'll give u 5/5
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- ninjadog34 - 10/05/2008
- Please comment on anything that you think should be changed
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