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Hello! My name is Chowder. I know that might seem like an odd name, but, you see, I am a dog.
A golden retriever to be genetically correct. I live in California. But let’s not start here in the middle of all of it; let’s start back when my owners first got me, 13 years ago.
The first time I saw all of them, looking at me to see if I was right for their family. The truth was though that I really just wanted to sleep, no matter how much I wanted to get out of that pound, sleep was the only thing on my mind. I woke up to an abrupt shaking I got up and looked around. I was in a car, with the same family that was looking at me earlier! I finally got out of that grungy place! When they took me out of the back and into their home I looked around, the place was huge! I started running around immediately, what would any other puppy do? I was so excited! I finally had I family, to call my own!
They were all so nice and so caring. Even little baby Amanda. I loved when Carrie's sister Christine,(Amanda,Kathrine and Bella's aunt) brought her baby -just a year older than Amanda- Marney, over to play with all of us, from New York!
Years Have past now and i am not the puppy i used to be. I am an old dog and have been sleeping alot lately. I remember that day after sleeping like on the first day they got me, i got up and started running around again like a puppy! Kathrine and Amanda had just gotten home from school and Bella was at her grandparent's house. They were all playing with me like they used to even Carrie and her husband Bob. We were all running around the yard, like little kids, with the California sun shining bright over head, like a gift from above. And i felt sleepy, once again and for the last few minutes of my life i lived them out the best way possible, with the ones you love and happy. I layed down and went to sleep,in the shining sun and surronded by the family, out of all of the people in California, that chose me.
Hello! My name is Chloe! And i hope that the Petalos', the family i belong to, previous dog can look over me and help me to be the best pet dog ever! I have a sleep over planned with 11 year old Amanda and 12 year old Marney, her cousin! Lets hope i can sneak in without getting caught by Carrie, like last time!This is my family, who out of all the people in California, chose me!
- by iTom-boy_Rissxx |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: A dog's life
- Artist: iTom-boy_Rissxx
- Description: about a very sweet dog who lived a great life. this is the short version less detailed.
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: legend chowder
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Comments (4 Comments)
- iTom-boy_Rissxx - 03/08/2009
- your very welcome. it was based on a real story about a golden that my cousins owned. i just switched the names a bit. im glad you liked it
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- shuugamoti - 02/18/2009
- i lost my sister (a siberian husky) last year. its best to remember the greatness of life (instead of regret the loss) like you have demonstrated here. i really enjoyed this, thank you.
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- iTom-boy_Rissxx - 12/10/2008
- hey guys if i may change something that i just realized doesnt make sense:I remember that I was sleeping on the first day they got me. I got up and started running around again like a puppy!
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- Saccillia The-One-Eyed - 12/08/2008
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hey migi!
i ddnt know that you wrte stories. your realy good at them!
i especially like how the dog is the narator and speaks with a familiar contex. please post more!!! - Report As Spam