Screamness of Happiness

• Artist: Xxshe_malaysia98xX
• Description: I mixed it with comedian and horror..
  
  WARNING!!
  IF U NOT 18 N UNDER..THE 20an WILL SCREAMNESS OF HAPPINESS FOR U..
  (I dun noe wat I'm saying..hope u giggles)
• Date: 05/02/2009
• Tags: screamness happiness

*Giggles*..*This movie jus not frigthened me*said Zim..Kim sighs..n she asked..*why u dun like horror movies*..*these movie is the 100000000000 horror movie u have seen*..*u still didn't afraid of this movie*..*It's jus like screamness of happines neutral ..Zim said*UGGH WHAT'S AGAIN?!?I'VE HearD OF WATEVA THING..IT'S JUS I DUN LIKE IT OKEYS?!?*..Kim said "forget it brader..u a JERK talk2hand ..One day Kim dun go home in the late night..Kim wanna punished Zim..Zim is sleeping..He Heard a glass "kilin klong klang".then it's broke..Zim go out of the bed..he went to the kitchen n seen a funny ghost.. dramallama ...then he giggles..*r u afraid*the ghost said..*Have I to?!?*..then the ghost turns to be soo scary:r u afraid now?!?*..*Why i've supposed??..then the ghost feeling soo bad..the ghost said*OK I'VE HEARD ENOUGH..NOW SEE MY LEGS..*then Zim looks..u dun have legs..*AGGGHHH* burning_eyes ..he screamed like a gurl..hen the ghost said*u afraid now??*..Zim screamed n giggle screamed n giggles screamed n giggles..n he keep saying that again n again..the ghost sighs..n said why u dun afraid of me???..Zim said it is screamness of happiness.. rofl rofl rofl

Comments

[Xxshe_malaysia98xX]

it actually natim...i'm do this when i was sleepy..so i'm gonna do another soon....plss dun komen anymore..

[Rainbow Xylophones]

I'm confused.... What exactly is this?

[Sildron]

That was hard to read.

[Knit Purl Knit]

Honestly, honey, is this the best you could do?
The smiley's are unnecessary and distracting. The random llama in the middle of the page is fitting for the story.
If the idea of the story was to be humorous then maybe you should have made it funny.
Additionally, your story would be much more effective if you were to correct all your grammatical errors. This would clarify any misunderstandings, and make it a much better reading experience for your audience.

[hariz_gold]

dun understand...

[blahblah bleh bloo]

not understand laa.

[Xxshe_malaysia98xX]

plss comment..this ois my first invention..hak3...