- The grass swayed back and forth its light green color looked as if it were an ocean that stretched to the end of the world and back. I fell backwards into the green sea with my eyes shut hoping to drown in its innocents. Yet when I opened my eyes I saw the bright blue sky. With one little cotton cloud that morphed into a snow white rabbit trying to drown its self in the blue sky!! NOOO! I screamed reaching for the rabbit... Why would the rabbit do that! I thought and thought about it like when Winne-their-poo tried to find were the honey was hidden. Then it hit me this poor rabbit was all by himself no one to love him and no one cared what happen to him. I wanted to die with the rabbit! Maybe if we died together we would at least know that we had someone to hug us and love us even if it was our last seconds of life. Then the next thing I noticed was the cloud departed and the rabbit disappeared. Looking at the sky my tears began to stream down my face the rabbit had left me. He left me like everyone else had in my life. I curled up into beetle position and let it all out. wanting to yell for someone but there was no one to yell for. No mom and no dad. There was no one that could save me. I tried to stop myself from breaking down. I am 15 and 15 year olds don't cry but every time I said that I began to cry even more cause I was letting 15 years of sorrow and pain out of the over flowing bottle I kept it in. so I laid there waiting for someone, anyone to come and save me. Even though I knew no one would. After about 10 minutes I had no more tears my throat was sour and still all I could do was lay there and stare at the grass swaying back and forth with the beat of my tourn heart....
- by unicorn-luver-101 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/30/2009 |
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- Title: Left to cry..
- Artist: unicorn-luver-101
- Description: this the story i wrote when my grandmother died and i was shipped of to live with my father leaveing my friends behind and leaving my life there and my heat... i hope you like it....
- Date: 06/30/2009
- Tags: life drown sorrow whocares
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Comments (4 Comments)
- unicorn-luver-101 - 05/31/2010
- Thank you very much ^_^
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- takoz da emo - 05/07/2010
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i give it a 5
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- unicorn-luver-101 - 07/02/2009
- its not supposed to be emo dude i just was sad and felt like writing if u got a problem with it i dont care!!!
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- Wizardon - 06/30/2009
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More emo s**t in the arena.....something original for once?
Dear God people.....1 star'd. - Report As Spam