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Do You?
Do you feel lonely?
Do you feel sad?
Do you sometimes feel that your going mad?
Do you feel quiet?
Do you feel shy?
Do you see darkness nearby?
Do you sing a sad song?
Like Open Wounds or When I'm gone?
Do you look up at the sky?
Thinking of the one word why?
Do you?
- by _VaMpIrE_KaTo_ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/11/2008 |
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- Title: Do You?
- Artist: _VaMpIrE_KaTo_
- Description: Well this is the first Poem I ever wrote. I wrote it in August and I was feeling kinda sad and I just felt like trying to make a Poem it's kinda short and it is crap since it's my first poem so yeh..
- Date: 10/11/2008
- Tags: depressionemosadfirstshort
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iiDeadWoman - 06/21/2009
- How much time did yew take on this? 10 seconds? DX
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- Golden Sarah-Belle - 12/14/2008
- not a good poem. no depth, its to repetetive, and the vocabulary isnt all that great. needs a LOT of work
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- HERS_FOREVER - 10/13/2008
- EMO POWER
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- rockgirl2012 - 10/13/2008
- hey someone actally put the way i feel into words. i have felt like that many times but, was not able to put it into words. thanks o yeah and just because it is your first poem does not mean that wont like it the most.
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- Rose Tanakui - 10/12/2008
- Nu uh it is NOT CRAP ITS PWNFUL biggrin
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- Cyndra Askiron - 10/12/2008
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For the firt poem it is very nice I think...
And don't worry, when you write more they'll get better - Report As Spam
- La Promenade Morte - 10/11/2008
- eh...could be better, could be worse.
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