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When you tell me that you like her
I cheer you on, because that's what friends do
But can't you see the crack in my heart?
When you ask her out
I wish you all the luck in the world
But can't you see my tears that fall?
When you talk to her
I know you'll win her precious heart
But can't you see you've already have mine?
When you hug her tight
I take the picture for you
But you can't see I wish she were me
When you kiss her lips
I tell you that you're very brave
But you can't see the pain that broke me in two
When you tell me you love her
I wish you happiness with her
But you can't see that I'll love you forever
When you two break apart
I comfort you, and say "everything's gonna be alright"
But I can see that this cycle will begin again,
where I am never her
- by XxMoonlit BellaxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/27/2008 |
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- Title: When You
- Artist: XxMoonlit BellaxX
- Description: A Poem about a girl who loves her guy best friend, but her guy bestfriend loves another girl. So what else could she do? Nothing
- Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: heartbreak love pain
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The Lady Andromeda - 08/01/2008
- I cried...this is beatiful.
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- evil_dr_monkmonk - 07/31/2008
- Wow, that was nice! It was like I was that girl!! 5/5
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- bill357 - 07/30/2008
- Wow it is like you are there
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- captain_the_porn_star - 07/30/2008
- i think that is onee of the most simply and touching poems i have ever read. I feel so sad, yet sprited
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- reapersuns manfriend - 07/29/2008
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Kind of a bad title.
Not a bad poem. I felt like I was in her shoes. - Report As Spam
- KoolBeansBabee - 07/29/2008
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Wow, that's deep. True also.. i have seen so many relations
like this one. It's very heartbraking.. 2 see things like this. Your poem leaves a clear picture instead of leaving the reader confused. Very good, you should keep writing =] your very talented. Keep it up!
deff 5-stars! smile - Report As Spam
- jocef_XP - 07/29/2008
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epic win for the girl who loves her best guy friend.
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