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When you were 8 years
old, your mom handed you an ice
cream. You thanked her by dripping it
all over your lap.
.
When you were 9 years old, she paid for
piano lessons. You thanked her by
never even bothering to practice.
.
When you were 10 years old she drove
you all day, from soccer to football
to one birthday party after another.You thanked her by jumping out of the
car and never looking back.
.
When you were 11 years old, she took
you and your friends to the movies.You thanked her by asking to sit in a
different row.
.
When you were 12 years old, she warned
you not to watch certain TV shows. You
thanked her by waiting until she left
the house.
.
When you were 13, she suggested a
haircut that was becoming. You thanked
her by telling her she had no taste.
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When you were 14, she paid for a month
away at summer camp. You thanked her by
forgetting to write a single letter.
.
When you were 15, she came home from
work, looking for a hug. You thanked
her by having your bedroom door locked.
.
When you were 16, she taught you how
to drive her car. You thanked her by
taking it every chance you could.
.
When you were 17, she was expecting
an important call. You thanked her by
being on the phone all night.
.
When you were 18, she cried at your
high school graduation . You thanked
her by staying out partying until dawn.
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When you were 19, she paid for your
college tuition, drove you to campus
carried your bags. You thanked her by
saying good-bye outside the dorm so you
wouldn't be embarrassed in front of
your friends.
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When you were 25, she helped to pay
for your wedding, and she cried and
told you how deeply she loved you. You
thanked her by moving halfway across
the country.
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When you were 50, she fell ill and
needed you to take care of her. You
thanked her by reading about the
burden parents become to their
children.And then, one day, she
quietly died.
.
And everything you never did came
crashing down like thunder on YOUR HEART..
- by Black_Rose_Dying_159 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: Love your mom!!
- Artist: Black_Rose_Dying_159
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Description:
love your mom becuz u never know
when she will be gone :( - Date: 12/01/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Elizinspiration - 12/21/2008
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T~T That is so sad omg
to speechless to describe words to even say.
its just to depressing. - Report As Spam
- Damn Your Slow - 12/09/2008
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this made me depressed =/
still.....
5/5 ;]] - Report As Spam
- a peace remaining - 12/05/2008
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On another note, nice theme! My mom has cancer, and so I know first-hand how wonderful, but fragile a mother can be. I'm closer to her than I am to anybody else. And yes, I tell her and show her that I love her regularly! XP
Note: I don't normally spew personal information, but your poem makes me want to justify my own behavior. Good job!
And I changed my mind-- you get a 4 - Report As Spam
- a peace remaining - 12/05/2008
- Nice, overall. The verses got a little redundant, though. Why not omit a few years? How about every four or five years instead of every one from 8 to 19? Also, you don't need the capitalization of the last two words-- they speak just as loudly when they are not. I also don't really understand the "reading about the burden parents become on their children" part. Did he read it to his mom? Great overall. The first verse especially is wonderful. A strong hook. 3/5
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- Tinzing - 12/04/2008
- o plus i have a poem its This Is my heart add a comment there please i want to know what u think
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- Tinzing - 12/04/2008
- OMG! thats so sad i love my mom im going to tell her that right now thank you for writing this ok
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