The Cheated

• Artist: Paper Crane Kiko
• Description: this is a poem about a girl who saw the one she loved with another. she was on her way to see him when she saw. she just sat in the snow and hid and cried and asked herself why he hurt her. then she escapes pain and enters the peae you an't find any other place but death.she left this worl for a calm and dark abyss.
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: cheated

The snow falls; white, crisp in the inky sky.

A rose falls; a scarlet pinpoint in an eggshell abyss.

A girl sits crying out. "Why? Why? Why?"

She's been hurt. She's been cheated.

She sits cold and lonely in the silent wisps.

Snow caresses her face.

She needs to leave this place.

Yet all she does is sits, sits, sits.

Dying inside from loss; and out from chill.

Now she lies dead from pain... so still.

Comments

[ArtVamp_Reject]

Hum...such a dark MIND, Ms.Kiko....but a lovely piece ^_^

[the silver belladonna]

this is one is really good i like ur use of repatition thats very rare to see nowadays well at least i havent seen it in a while

btw tnx for saying my work is good but i dont think its better then urs

[Paper Crane Kiko]

i worked hard on this... it took me 1 week t write. i hope u enjoy my work!