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FEAR
Fear is your lungs crying for help
Fear is your heart stopping in its tracks, paralyzed
Fear is your mother’s nemesis
Fear is a your father’s dark secret
When you cry, fear will laugh
When you laugh, fear will cry
When you frown, fear will smile
When you smile, fear will frown
When you think that fear wants you to die
Think again
Fear wants you to FEAR death
Your sword…..is hope
When you think that fear wants you to suffer
Think again
Fear wants you to FEAR suffering
Your shield…..is hope
- by Soldier of Dark and Light |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Fear
- Artist: Soldier of Dark and Light
- Description: just a poem i came up with
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: fear
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Quzo - 12/30/2008
- The first stanza/Verse is good. How about making the 2nd one start with all word beggining with A and the 3rd all word beigining with E and the 4 all word begining with R
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- dove_hart - 07/16/2008
- Not too bad I guess.
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- supermizurachan - 07/16/2008
- It wasn't perfect, so I gave it a 4 out of 5 :3
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- Soldier of Dark and Light - 07/15/2008
- I'll accept any criticism, i just need to work at it a bit more...
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- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
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Dismal, abysmal, cataclysmic, and with any luck, altruistic.
This was... poor. - Report As Spam
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