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• Artist: Argent Tirer
• Description: This is a poem that I had to write for English. Please Rate fairly and give constructive criticism.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: sadness horror death

The desire to live burns
Proclaiming faith, anger, and revolt

All senses and emotions elevate

I can see it
In their eyes
The horror

The feeling of no final closure

Silently flames devour
A lifetime of memories

It is the end

Comments

[GenoStar09]

what's your subject? racism, fear? I like the set up but give it more it has no purpose but to just be and being is void with out reason for being.