The Raindrop Tree

• Artist: LOLCATZBBQ
• Description: A poem about when your in a tough spot, saying that things will get better.
  
  Original Poem "The Raindrop Tree" was written by my mother
  
  This remake is dedicated to her and her writings
  
  Many things were changed in her poem
  
  :3
  Dedicated to mom (:
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: poem

Come sit a while
and talk with me
I'll tell you bout the Raindrop Tree
Whose branches wave
In sorrowed skies
To pluck the tears
from saddened eyes
And the power lies
In all of us
Believe a little
Come on you must
When things get hard
Or when there rough
Dont stop
When the going gets tough
Things arent easy
Arent as they seem
But with a hint of Magic
And if you believe
Comes the power of the
Raindrop Tree.

A poem dedicted to all who are going through a tough time

Comments

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

There's a little bit of spelling that could be fixed up, but other than that, it's great!! Nice job ^_^

[Viral Agent]

I love it, which is weird, because I usually hate the poetry here on Gaia. But it's hopeful in a non-tears-and-bloody-roses kind of way

[7he Fox]

I hate to point out the punctuation errors (apostrophes) but other than that, I thought it was very fun, creative, and a great piece of writing. ^_^

[I3e]

terrific

[LOLCATZBBQ]

Thank you (:

[teh_fluffer_puppers]

oh my, I absolutely loved it!!!

[LOLCATZBBQ]

ty smile