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I am here
You are there
We are here
Everywhere
Now we're gone
Far and wide
We're how you feel
Deep inside
Now your lost
Eternal sleep
I have your soul
Mine to keep
Now I enter
Inside your head
I destroy your mind
Now your dead
I have won
I always do
But there is something
I must do
You are there
Your mind is on
Where am I
I am gone
- by Generic Individual |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- parvanirose - 10/02/2011
- Should be "Now you're lost" and "Now you're dead". 4/5 though. It's good otherwise.
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- ElectraShocked - 08/01/2009
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really good, but I didn't really know what it was about untill I read your description. Address what it's about somewhere in the poem maybe....?
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- Generic Individual - 07/16/2008
- Not all poetry has a set rhythm. But that's not the point. It does. Try again.
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- Okami Nanashi - 07/16/2008
- Needs a rythm
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- Generic Individual - 07/16/2008
- > >; o-o;
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- jellyfied123 - 07/16/2008
- ok then
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