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Here they meet, prepared to end
Forbidden love which cannot last.
Torn up hearts that will not mend
Their spoiled present, their perfect past.
Tender touches, silent vows
Both remembered by these two.
Actions people wont allow,
Not ever this rendezvous.
Here they stand, two males alike
Each other they will always miss.
Apart they'll be from man's dislike,
A pact sealed with a precious kiss.
- by The Sharpie Prototype |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Forbidden Love
- Artist: The Sharpie Prototype
- Description: I started writing this about a male and female, but as I continued it was much more pretty about two males.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: forbidden love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- demonkyo12 - 07/27/2010
- It is amazing, and so true. Society doesn't accept many things, and same sex love is one of them. 5/5
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- lautnerrules43 - 07/29/2009
- so it's about 2 gay guys? wow, this poem seems too good for that. great job!!
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- Nana teru teru - 01/21/2009
- it would have been really sweet with two females, but so many men will make it tainted and perverted, why cant it just be tender and sweet ♥♥♥ ^~^
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- The Sharpie Prototype - 07/19/2008
- Thank you all for you comments and criticism!
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- juntomregal55400bjk - 07/17/2008
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it's good 4. here are my edits:2nd stanza 1st line A silent vow instead of silent vows and 2nd stanza 4th line add an adjective.
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- ekitten614 - 07/17/2008
- Wow, that's really great! I love the rhyming, and the theme. How it seems like at the beginning it's a male and a female who live too far apart or something... and then at the end you realize it's not, and only society is keeping them apart. ^^ Great job!
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- ParkMusic - 07/17/2008
- its pretty.
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