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A L I C E
by Ina Echimaru (me)
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"She's gone,
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She's gone"
Is what races through her mind,
as she sat there dazed
Like her life was on the line.
"She's gone,
SHE'S GONE!
She's gone"
holding her white stuffed rabbit,
as she shaked and she shook
Looking for a way out,
O, how she was hooked to that single book.
"SHE'S GONE,
SHE'S GONE!
SHE'S GONE!"
Her body bobbed,
her blue eyes held wide
as she began to fell,
with the edges of her eyes
began to crack,
so as she fell she cryed;
"SHE'S GONE!
SHE'S GONE!
SHE'S GONE!"
stuffing her rabbit down her shirt,
she flailed and she frowned
stummbleing but she was not hurt,
searching, searching
for that one gap,
where the rabbit had come from
like it was her map.
"BA-THUMP"
knees caved in,
her little blue dress brought in a twist
blonde hair disguiseing herself,
dragging her body with an arm, a fist
where a hole was found,
amoungst the fixed.
"A l i c c c e e
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SHE IS GONE!"
lies on the floor,
no movement, no heartbeat
just a distorted girl.
Brought to you by Oblivious Sharada
- by Oblivious Sharada |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: ALICE
- Artist: Oblivious Sharada
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Description:
This is a poem that was meant to match my profile.
It is also on my profiles description. People tell me that I'm good at this.
May I have your comments on my work, pls? :3 <3 I'm also NOT emo... - Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: oblivious alice poem
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Comments (3 Comments)
- obiyakasu o kage - 03/13/2009
- quite the quier poem of sorts, but indeed i like it as well. 5/5 because you have potential ^_^
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- CheshireDaydreams - 07/19/2008
- Woah. That was really good. 5/5
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- Irene_Rook - 07/19/2008
- this is very sad & heart wrenching poem, 5/5
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