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I see her dancing around the street
oh how beautiful she looks, but she doesn't know
oh but she doesnt know
when i look into her eyes, theres more then her disguise
oh oh how elegent she is.
I can't believe this
how am i so lucky,
to have my arms around this angel oh this angel
the smile on her face is no discrase
but the very moment she smiles at me
oh thats all i can see.
- by The_Pumpkin_King87 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: She Doesn't Know
- Artist: The_Pumpkin_King87
- Description: This is about a girl that I love very much.
- Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- chelsiebelle - 12/30/2008
- Why all the oh's? And I agree with vanjoy... it's a sweet poem. You should show it to her! smile 3/5
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- Hannah Starz - 07/17/2008
- I love it. If a boy wrote that to me we would be married by now! ^_^
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- vanjoy - 07/17/2008
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your poem is not bad overall, just make sure that you are only using one tense and do a spell check
that would make it perfect 3.5/5 - Report As Spam